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Gabriele Pfund
{K:11745} 5/17/2003
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I like it just as it is; beautiful !!
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Peggy Heise
{K:937} 4/26/2003
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I like the composition and the colors. I have to agree with the others about using a fill flash to get the center flowers seen better. :)
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Sandra Battaglia
{K:910} 4/26/2003
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I really like the natural use of light and shade in the blossoms but maybe a little more brightness in the central portion would be nice.:)Beautiful contrasts...and I can almost smell the fragrance.
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Richard Walters
{K:480} 4/26/2003
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I see what you're going for here ... very good attempt ... personally I've always liked back lit subjects which are thin enough to let light shine through ... shows a bit of translucense, and therefore, describes another aspect of the subject. I do agree that the center mass of flowers is still a tad too dark and that if you lightened a little more, then you loose the translucense you may be going for ... try a fill flash, but be careful not to let the flash be as bright as the main light from the back.
very nice attempt.
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Vicki Bentley
{K:5080} 4/26/2003
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A very original composition. I would use fillflash to highlight the center and removed someof the branches to bring the focal point to your center cluster. Hope to see more of your work.
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augusto mario cunha
{K:19049} 4/26/2003
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A curious photo. Good composition and colors but your center of interest lies in the shadows and cannot be clearly seen.
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