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Critique By:
Kim kyungsang (K:14135)
9/27/2004 3:02:58 AM
nice composed landscape. need a white tones,
by control ps work!, thanks!
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Critique By:
Ken Alexander (K:3905)
9/26/2004 3:42:54 AM
Great street photography, the pose tells a story about how they relate to each other. Ideally it would be sharper and maybe more contrasty, but it's good as is.
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Critique By:
gary spillane (K:1617)
9/25/2004 3:39:53 PM
greetings Dr. Rafael,
I would like to thank you on your comment on 'another long day at work', the worst part about it is that this young man chooses not to work, he is part of a group of young men and women in this area that work the streets instead of getting a real job. The economy in this area is very good and anyone who wants a job can have one. His sign states that he will work but I don't belive that that is the case and unfortunately that is the 'quality' of a lot of young men and women in America today.
yet once again you have opened my eyes to one of my own photos, and again I thank you.
regards,
gary spillane
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Critique By:
Dr. Rafael Springmann (K:89517)
9/25/2004 8:32:35 AM
The expression on the face of the guy in your "another long day at work" may be funny, but the situation is tragic. The small sign saying "quality" just next to the guy adds an atmosphere of cinicism to the photo.
Thank you, Gary, for your generous comment on my "Evening in Tel Aviv".
Regards,
Rafi
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Critique By:
Dino Correia (K:1980)
9/24/2004 2:26:57 PM
Great shot
Simple and direct
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Critique By:
Kim kyungsang (K:14135)
9/24/2004 2:22:56 PM
hungry? me,too
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Critique By:
Maria José Barres (K:11276)
9/23/2004 10:48:18 PM
LOvely portrait... I like its expresion!
Greetings.
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Critique By:
Mark Beltran (K:32612)
9/23/2004 5:59:29 AM
When a cat poses for you, it's a gift!
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Critique By:
Kim kyungsang (K:14135)
9/23/2004 5:01:09 AM
This cat likes you. Sympathy deep photograph.
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Critique By:
Kees and Carolyn (K:15193)
9/23/2004 4:53:37 AM
What a touching photo! So well done! This really lifts my spirits!
Carolyn
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Critique By:
Kim kyungsang (K:14135)
9/23/2004 4:49:31 AM
Square margin some insufficiency.
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Critique By:
gary spillane (K:1617)
9/23/2004 4:21:44 AM
greetings kim,
I love your photos and very highly respect your comments on my photographs, it truly is an honor to meet you and view your work.
again I thank you
gary
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Critique By:
Khaled Mursi Hammoud (K:54005)
9/22/2004 11:35:54 PM
Nicely composed photo, it seems like your friend really likes the dog, and the dog shares this feeling? It's really a nice shot and great capture,....regards...Khaled.
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Critique By:
Kim kyungsang (K:14135)
9/22/2004 2:08:26 AM
this pic is very lovely expression image! nice capture!
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Critique By:
Kim kyungsang (K:14135)
9/22/2004 2:07:08 AM
very nice composed! nice contrast!
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Critique By:
Khaled Mursi Hammoud (K:54005)
9/21/2004 12:38:15 AM
Although it's burred, yet I like it and I like the green tone, good work...regards.
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Critique By:
Dr. Rafael Springmann (K:89517)
9/20/2004 8:14:10 AM
Except for the cropping, you achieved a very good mysterious atmosphere in your "misty morning", Gary. I would even say that the atmosphere is almost frightening.
Thank you for your comprehensive comment on my "Fly on yellow".
Regards,
Rafi
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Critique By:
gary spillane (K:1617)
9/20/2004 2:20:15 AM
thank you kim and I agree
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Critique By:
Kim kyungsang (K:14135)
9/20/2004 2:17:13 AM
This photograph over exposure is necessary.
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Critique By:
Kim kyungsang (K:14135)
9/20/2004 2:15:50 AM
nice contrast, tone.
but White cloth need a little burning.
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Critique By:
Bea Friedli (K:10189)
9/20/2004 2:03:29 AM
blurred but awesome..love the face on this..great !
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Critique By:
Khaled Mursi Hammoud (K:54005)
9/18/2004 10:55:36 PM
Hi Gary, the composition of the shot is good but it's too dark...You learn by taking more and more pictures and getting criticism on them...You must share your photos and see others too... Welcome to usefilm group...Regards.
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Critique By:
Kim kyungsang (K:14135)
9/15/2004 6:12:56 AM
Good underwater living thing(aquarium) capture.
Compared to it peels a lot and when - it catches. Thanks friend
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Critique By:
Dr. Rafael Springmann (K:89517)
9/9/2004 9:39:52 AM
This is the first time we meet on the pages of "Usefilm", Mr. Spillane and depite your "Dart" not being the last photo you posted and hence the first one for me to see, I would like to comment on it becuase it caught my eye. As you ask for critique, good or bad, I would like to start by telling you that in a photo like this it is best to have the focus on the eye of the subject. I know that when your subject is a fish this is a very difficult task, but it adds to the photo.
On the other hand the color is radient and you catured that very well.
Thank you for your comment on my "Inside C". Of course you are invited to look at further photos in my portfolio and I hope that you accept my critique in the spirit it was given. Hoping to meet you again on these pages,
regards,
Dr. Rafael (Rafi) Springmann
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Critique By:
Phil M (K:11526)
9/9/2004 7:33:55 AM
Thanks for your comment - this is a great shot! 
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Critique By:
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9/5/2004 10:48:53 PM
nice colors,good job.
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Critique By:
Konstantin Yudintsev (K:3253)
9/5/2004 10:33:30 PM
One of a Happy Dog!
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Critique By:
Ian McIntosh (K:42997)
9/5/2004 1:43:16 PM
Great composition. Big unlikey forms. I wonder if it would have been a day to bracket the exposure because it seems to have come out a bit drabber than it perhaps actually was.
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Critique By:
Kim kyungsang (K:14135)
9/5/2004 10:21:06 AM
This photograph is beautiful composition and sense.
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Critique By:
Kim kyungsang (K:14135)
9/5/2004 3:19:48 AM
The composition and the birds eye angle is good too much. Thanks, friend
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