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Critique By:
Chris Boivin (K:9030)
12/15/2006 4:54:27 AM
Hi April,
A feastive picture, but it would have been hard for me to tell without your about that is what they were doing. I like how you have some of the music sheets captured in the picture. As a suggestion for the same shot, try a different perspective with maybe the music sheet more in the bottom of the frame and the two children centered behind it. This would definately give the feeling of music or singing in the picture. Also, I think in this picture you only have a portion of the faces and music nothing is fully shown so I don't know what the main subject is. A great idea for a feastive picture and please take this as only suggestions and ideas.
Regards,
Chris
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Photo By: April the 1st
(K:24)
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Critique By:
Chris Boivin (K:9030)
6/5/2006 1:40:36 AM
Hi Gregory,
I like this composition but I think the light was not on your side. The dark row of tree's lacks definition and the shadows on the mountain in the bottom left kind of blend into the tree tops. I see that you used a fisheye and the width to the picture is very nice. Not sure what time of day you took this but maybe there would be a time where the light is higher to reduce some of those shadows. Just some thoughts....
All the best,
Chris
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| Photo By: Gregory McLemore
(K:35129)
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