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Critique By:
Travis Good (K:30)
7/27/2005 2:53:20 PM
Turning the Vietnam Veterans' Memorial into a reflecting wall and thereby doubling the leave-behind rememberances and doubling a national monumument is quite moving. Very nicely done!
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| Photo By: Alex Avilov
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Critique By:
Travis Good (K:30)
4/17/2005 6:23:05 PM
Catching "the moment" is so rewarding. I especially enjoy the added flair of suspended water in the action. It adds a sense of frozen moment. Nice job!
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| Photo By: Kristian Sekulic
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Critique By:
Travis Good (K:30)
4/17/2005 4:35:13 PM
The person in my picture seems a distraction to some viewers. For me, it served several purposes. First, it added a human element which developed the theme of a park with people walking around enjoying it. Second, it really drove home the lack of depth of field effect that I was going for. Lastly, it added an additional focal point for a viewer's eye. For someone to realize these goals of mine they had to be inside my head so I understand the comments and, having seen the edits to the picture I can certainly appreciate the person-free version.
The feedback is great and it's flatering to have my picture improved upon.
Thanks! Travis
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| Photo By: Travis Good
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