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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
12/4/2001 3:36:04 PM
Hi Jason,
I like this that it speaks to me in a fashion sense.
I don't know if that was what you are aiming for but it is GREAT!
Lyza Perrenoud
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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
11/9/2001 3:33:56 PM
Nanette and Detlef,
Thanks very much for the comments.
I also like the pose , unfortunately that's what I filled the frame in so it is kind of cut off ( her hands, thighs and hips). I might have to educate myself more on my scanner
as it has blurred the image. Also I actually put a diffuser filter on the camera lens.
It was actually my intention to do this. To do a hard look and show a come-hither soft aspect.
Hoping I make sense.
thanks again.
Lyza P
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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
11/9/2001 3:09:29 PM
Hello Ninfa,
I like this image a lot.
First, I too like how the vignettes show on the holga.
The sky shows the clouds nicely and the shadows and contrasts in the whole image is very nice.
Great shot.
That goes for the other one titled Oviedo.
Lyza Perrenoud
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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
10/10/2001 11:28:14 PM
Hi Jason,
Great image.
I like a lot of black and whites.
Also writing to thank you for comments and compliments you send me about the "nude" I posted b4 it's deletion to this site.
Yes...it was meant as "fetishy " shot. I,too had "issues" with her face lacking some light. I should've metered.
I am always experimenting and that was one of those times.
BTW she was leaning on a wall. I actually had to crop the image.
But thanks again.
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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
10/9/2001 1:48:27 PM
Detlef,
Thanks for the compliment.
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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
10/8/2001 11:10:44 PM
Hello Arthur,
Thanks for the compliments.
I agree that the tulips'highlites look blown out.
I wanted to show more detail and maybe adjust the image thru phot shop...But I haven't figured it out YET.
And since I was experimenting with a flash here this is what I got. Or maybe I should concentrate more in my darkroom when printing the positive.
anyway..thank you.
Lyza P
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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
10/8/2001 11:01:39 PM
Hello,
To Alisa..
thanks for the compliments.
I have actually posted a few images on the site.
Some I do to get any critique whatsoever. I am always learning. I checked your posts...not shabby at all.
To Debbie,
Thank you also.
This is one of my faves that I took.
These double and triple exposures are always the happy mistakes I get. Thank god.
I'm actually learning thru the mistakes how to compose them when they happen. If you kow what I mean.
Lyza Perrenoud
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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
10/2/2001 9:06:58 PM
for Vladimir,
Thanks for the comments.
It is much appreciated.
Helps with my learing and improvements.
Thanks again.
L.P
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