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Critique By:
Giulio Rotelli (K:28441)
12/29/2005 11:57:33 PM
uno scatto carico di amore e sentimento, molto bella e appropriata anche l'elaborazione grafica..
7/7 e complimenti...
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
John Loreaux (K:86210)
12/21/2004 1:15:46 PM
Hello Lynn!
I think this is wonderful but could be improved By focusing on Her face and better use of depth of field by making the background blurry.Mayby even a more beautiful background would make this photo stand out.
Your duaghter is very beautiful and lights up the photo!It's a real good shot that could be a real great shot!
Hope this helped Lynn!
Take care, My best..........JOHN
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
* James * (K:20200)
12/21/2004 12:58:16 PM
the first thng that came to my mind when i saw the thumbnail, was that this girl seems to be in a rather unnatural and uncomfortable position. also, the light, in my mind, seems just a tiny bit too bright on her face (left side).
it is a nice photo overall however, in my opinion.
good work.
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
Maciej Malesinski (K:144)
11/15/2004 9:37:42 PM
Hi,
Every one seems to agree that the face is the most important matter in this photo. The only thing I can add is that I feel a slight over-exposure.
So:
On your place I would have at first centered my camera on the girls face,
lock the focus and also lock the exposure (you can do it-I have checked that - "TTL-AE (multi-pattern, center weighted, center spot)" from camera specs).
Then just set image to look like it sould and shoot.
If model is stressed or just have a bad day it is good to shot two or three times, one by one. After the first, people seem to be more relaxed not knowing there will be others.
With regards,
Maciej
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
al Farrob (K:4087)
9/25/2004 10:42:48 PM
For me the crop works right, but I would like a thicker dof, I don't like the unfocused foreground
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Critique By:
bill heckel (K:384)
9/24/2004 2:05:27 PM
Take advantage of depth of field to improve the composition. Focus on her face or ever so slightly in front of her face. ( You can lock the autofocus on her face and move back a foot or so ) Then set the shutter speed as high as it can go ( Open up the lens ) to softly loose detail in the background.
If your camera is mostly automatic, use the sports or fast motion setting but with a low ASA if possible.
I like the natural setting but it does begin to overpower the subject when the detailed riverbank in in sharper focus than the subject.
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
Trish McCoy (K:15897)
9/10/2004 4:00:47 AM
I think it's beautiful. love the colors. and maybe do clone out the sticks at the bottom.
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Critique By:
A K (K:8499)
9/9/2004 12:23:39 AM
Love those soft tones. Her eyes are so big and trusting - very lovely.
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
José Azevedo (K:9845)
9/8/2004 6:18:45 AM
Hi Lynn,
first I'd like to say this is a lovely casual shot. I like the posing, her expression, really "real", very nice. I've two boys and they sometimes act in a very similar way when asked for a photo.
To your request, I've two suggestions to what could've gone better:
- Focus - physical focus. Seems like the camera's autofocus sensor focused on her shorts. Her face is slightly defocused, her left hand more. Check if your camera has some kind of focus lock so you can lock the focus on the subject and re-frame to compose the image the way you want. Usually, by pressing the shutter button half way you can lock focus.
- Focus "B" - subject focus. In my opinion, the main subject, or the subject of interest, or the most beautiful subject here are her eyes, face and expression. I'd have gone closer and filled the frame with her face. But you probably have so many images of her face that you decided to capture the posing, the acting, I believe. That's perfectly understandable :-)
Well, those are my two cents, hope to have added something. And congratulations for your image and daughter!
Regards from Brazil,
José Azevedo
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
9/8/2004 5:52:21 AM
What a vision of beauty!
This is technically and aesthetically wonderful!
Better? Hmmmm.
Perhaps clone out the two sticks lower left.
Not much to improve on, Lynn. Seriously.
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
Trish McCoy (K:15897)
9/8/2004 5:17:41 AM
This face is just so precious. she's a cutie.
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Critique By:
Margaret Sturgess (K:49403)
9/7/2004 7:02:00 AM
Great shot, love her expression
Margaret
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Critique By:
C W (K:4458)
8/28/2004 7:13:30 PM
This is a beautiful portrait. I love the girl's expression. I am not too fond of the cropping though. I would like to have seen more of the left side. Regardless, you still have a nice shot here.
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
Trish McCoy (K:15897)
8/28/2004 6:13:29 AM
beautiful and soft tones. nice work.
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
Jim Gamble (K:12164)
8/27/2004 12:24:10 PM
Lynn, this put a laugh on my lips this morning.
Thanks for shairing.
Jim Gamble
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
A K (K:8499)
8/27/2004 10:01:31 AM
What an absolute cutie. Babies are adorable when learning to brush their teeth.
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Critique By:
Lynn Cason (K:97)
8/26/2004 1:08:18 PM
honestly, im not sure of the exact steps i took at the time. i play alot with photos, some work, some dont. i believe, if i can remember correctly, i made layers of her eyes, then enhanced the color, used diffused glow, played with brightness and contrast. ps is amazing, it's fun to play and see what you can creat!
thank you, 
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
Arne Hulstein (K:367)
8/26/2004 5:19:56 AM
Great shot. What did you do to achieve it?
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
Lynn Cason (K:97)
8/26/2004 2:19:10 AM
thank you for your comment. i believe she was 13 months at the time.
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Critique By:
Jeffrey Dodenbier (K:902)
8/26/2004 2:11:56 AM
Beautiful. This shot does have a great feel to it. There is no better standard to judge a composition by. How old is the subject?
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
Andy Pollard (K:1359)
8/25/2004 4:40:42 AM
Hey Lynn thanks for the comment. This is an awesome shot. You will do wonders with the camera.
Don't give the camera all the credit, for it is you who points the camera in the direction of all those amazing things we often overlook.
I like what you got have your portfolio thus far, I see a good eye.
Andy
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Critique By:
Tony Diana (K:13396)
8/25/2004 1:11:26 AM
Estupenda pespectiva
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
Tony Diana (K:13396)
8/25/2004 1:11:06 AM
Genial imagen para empezar un portfolio
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
Marcus Armani (K:36599)
8/23/2004 7:20:40 PM
Great shot, nice colors and detail, very sharp.....
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
**** ***** (K:9527)
8/20/2004 9:46:54 AM
Very beautiful! Love it!
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
Lukasz Kuczkowski (K:14687)
8/20/2004 7:25:05 AM
like the idea :-)
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
John Strazza (K:11535)
8/20/2004 3:44:47 AM
love this image - just wonderful ...
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
Elangovan S (K:10675)
8/20/2004 3:14:27 AM
Thats very cool. Could have been better if you had some interesting bg or stuff. However well seen and nice shot.
Elangs.
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| Photo By: Lynn Cason
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Critique By:
Timothy Schirmer (K:7201)
8/11/2004 8:13:01 AM
Cool shot. Tim
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Critique By:
bas soldaat (K:262)
8/10/2004 3:20:48 AM
Great photo, the blur makes the picture soft, which makes the idea of this photo live nice shot!
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