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Critique By:
E H (K:1665)
8/14/2006 6:22:24 PM
Erik:
This is wonderful! Composition, DOF, grain, tonality -- wonderful!
Cheers
Jaques
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
8/14/2006 5:48:08 PM
jaques,
thanks for the comment.
chers,
erik
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Critique By:
E H (K:1665)
8/13/2006 3:45:31 PM
Interesting.
Cheers
Jaques
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
6/17/2006 4:46:49 PM
thanks james! this was from my pre-DSLR days to boot.
cheers,
erik
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Critique By:
* James * (K:20200)
6/17/2006 8:49:27 AM
a nice shot of a nice city. you did well to make the thick glass on the chopper not noticable. i actually thought you had taken it with the door open.
very clear and clenly done shot.
james
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
6/5/2006 5:03:35 PM
thanks ism!! i know what you mean.
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Critique By:
ISMAEL MARCOS (K:10535)
6/5/2006 12:31:32 PM
.. and this is a joy to see her ...
ism
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
6/3/2006 3:39:47 AM
thanks trish! this one definitely has a bit more glare and shadow than i'm used to.
cheers,
erik
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Critique By:
Trish McCoy (K:15897)
6/3/2006 2:09:00 AM
gorgeous model. I like the warm colors. the only thing that bugs me is the shine on her nose. other than that great shot.
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
6/2/2006 9:40:23 PM
hey thanks for your time mark. i look forward to seeing sme of your recent stuff too.
ciao,
erik
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Critique By:
Mark Longo (K:12760)
6/2/2006 9:22:33 PM
Been distracted from Usefilm for a while so just seeing this now. I like it very much. There is a soft focus effect on the hair at the top of the shot that I like. Nice crop on this as well, creating an unusual balance between the body limbs and head. Candid but posed...
Regards,
Mark
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
5/30/2006 9:03:37 PM
narabia,
thanks for all of your insights. to me there is no such thing as "random" in the universe. even though we might not always see it, there is a design to everything we see, hear, feel, etc.
all the best,
erik
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Critique By:
narabia (K:9563)
5/30/2006 8:20:46 PM
Lens work well here. I am not sure about the composition. It seems to be random. There are nor rules... but sometimes the lack of rules is the rule  Of course composition is up to the author. So I can add only that love the softness here.
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
5/30/2006 5:39:40 AM
ismael,
OK great. more coming.
thanks,
erik
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Critique By:
ISMAEL MARCOS (K:10535)
5/29/2006 1:00:57 PM
MORE ... DON'T BE TIRED....
ISMAEL.
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
5/22/2006 4:55:49 PM
thanks for the nice comments larissa!
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
5/22/2006 4:55:10 PM
thanks so much kevin!
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
5/22/2006 4:54:24 PM
anson,
such a thoughtful comment. thank you so much!
cheers,
erik
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Critique By:
Anson Moye (K:3480)
5/22/2006 2:06:32 PM
Along with many others on UF, I was quite taken with "persephone #1" which to me exemplified a simple youthful exuberance that was uplifting and easy to look at. This one, Erik, is confusing to me and it might be the mixed signals the model is radiating. Her bodily stance, with the cocked elbow, the hand on the hip, and the full frontal view at first appears to be one of confrontation. Yet, her facial expression is one of confusion, like she can't believe what she is seeing. Somehow, the two together just don't play for me. If she had been partially turned, maybe then, the message may have come across differently. Nevertheless, the lighting is superb, the model is attractive, and the colors are interesting. I love #1, but #2 is less effective. Anson
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
5/22/2006 12:55:29 AM
thanks for the great comments Hugo. i think the image is stronger in its more organic form.
cheers,
erik
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Critique By:
Hugo de Wolf (K:185110)
5/22/2006 12:19:10 AM
Hi Erik, excellent shot, with the minimal use of tools and equipment. I like the angle too, it prevents such a simple approach from becoming static. Great shot.
I'm not sure if I would've "cleaned up" the spots on the surface, in a way, it makes it a bit less slick, yet on the other hand, it does add to the feel of the photo. I'm indecisive, I guess....
The tones and saturation are top notch, Awesome photo, Just my style...
Cheers,
Hugo
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
5/20/2006 5:52:59 PM
thanks so much my friend nacho!
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Critique By:
Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia (K:96391)
5/20/2006 2:19:26 PM
great lighting. marvelous tones. superb. 7
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Critique By:
Larissa Nazarova (K:12118)
5/20/2006 4:15:00 AM
Great vivid, fresh portrait. Nice colors, great details.
Larissa
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Critique By:
KEVIN TEMPLE (K:8657)
5/19/2006 11:31:34 PM
love this well done
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
5/19/2006 5:22:41 PM
hey thanks nacho!!
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
5/19/2006 5:14:59 PM
thanks for taking a look mohammed!
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Critique By:
Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia (K:96391)
5/19/2006 2:57:17 PM
prefessional. great work. 7
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Critique By:
Mohammed Al-kubaisi (K:55)
5/19/2006 6:54:50 AM
Thanks Erik for your pleasant comment. I've enjoied the visit of your site: already extremely interesting.
Thanks again. Regards
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
5/18/2006 11:58:18 PM
thanks jo!!
erik
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