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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
8/9/2004 11:35:43 AM
Gorgeous Carmem!!
I think this is one of the best waterfall shots I have ever seen. Well done.
7/7
Cheers...John.
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| Photo By: Carmem A. Busko
(K:48785)
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
8/2/2004 8:54:23 AM
You've nailed it with the "Big Sky" perspective in this version.
I can really feel the scale and majesty of the scene that must have confronted you--awesome!
John.
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| Photo By: Tim Schumm
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
8/2/2004 8:32:45 AM
In a word... Beautiful!
A triumph of colour and composition.
Cheers...John.
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| Photo By: Murilo Rafael de Souza
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
7/31/2004 1:00:51 AM
A very nice composition and exposure from a beautiful day. I like the perspective also and the pine trees remind me of the Hoop Pines from the island where I live.
Cheers...John.
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| Photo By: Carmem A. Busko
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
7/30/2004 11:22:13 AM
Stunning!
Colour, silhouette and composition. 7/7
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| Photo By: Murilo Rafael de Souza
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
7/28/2004 12:39:27 PM
Thankyou all for your comments. This particular shot has been a work in progress for some time now and each time I've felt I've failed to correctly grasp where the image really is. This
is the crop that seemed to work the best. I wanted the image to be stark and cold which is why I moved away from using colour--maybe in time I'll rethink that.
I've attached a small copy of the original  )
Thanks once again...John.
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| Photo By: John Mackay
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
7/28/2004 9:53:26 AM
Nice shot Sam, very very nice.
Great timing and composition.
Cheers...John.
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| Photo By: Sam
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
7/26/2004 10:56:40 AM
Hi Jorge,
It's a good concept and you've made good use of a diagonal in your picture. I like the lighting but would like to see more of the root.
Thanks for sharing...John.
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| Photo By: Jorge Martinez
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
7/26/2004 10:46:11 AM
Susie,
You know that feeling you get when you've nailed it? Well you nailed it--congratulations!
It has a stunning tonal range--fabulous.
I 'd love to know how you did that.
Thanks for sharing...John.
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| Photo By: Susie Darcey
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
7/24/2004 12:06:56 PM
Nice perspective, great light well done!
John.
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| Photo By: David Parker
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
7/19/2004 11:51:02 AM
Beautiful work Carmen!
All light, colour and shadows--it's magic
Thanks for sharing
John.
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| Photo By: Carmem A. Busko
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
7/15/2004 11:52:37 AM
I love this!!
What a magic image. I have seen this worked before but more as a gimmick. However, the conception, composition, DOF, texture and lighting in your creation are all perfect. well done. This is art!
Congratulations.
John.
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| Photo By: Gayle's Eclectic Photos
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
7/15/2004 11:17:00 AM
Thank you Gayle,
First ever colour IR of mine that I kept. I like the Hendrix reference. A few glasses of wine and I feel I could drown in all that purple.
on second thoughts maybe that's enough wine )
cheers
john.
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| Photo By: John Mackay
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
7/9/2004 8:47:25 AM
It's beautiful Micky!!
My only criticism is that you should have used a 6x7 )
What a magic image.
Thanks for sharing.
Ka kite ano...John.
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| Photo By: micky waby
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
7/9/2004 7:32:14 AM
Hi Orazio. Nice conceptualisation. For what it's worth I would reccomend that you re-work it again but this time when you flip the image apply a little perspective distortion to it to account for the fact that your film plane is not parallel to the reflected scene i.e. slightly squeeze down the left-hand side of your mirrored image (reflection). I would also recommend pulling back the curves in the reflected image as the reflection should be darker not lighter than the actual image.
Hope you find this critique helpful and constructive. Thanks for sharing.
Best regards...John.
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| Photo By: Orazio Minnella
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Critique By:
John Mackay (K:148)
7/3/2004 11:13:13 AM
What a fabulous moody shot made even better by the fact it was actually caught on film--I'm impressed.
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| Photo By: Lachlan Rex
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