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Critique By:
Ryan Shawgo (K:152)
4/2/2003 3:16:10 AM
I really like this, that's all. Excellent timing and use of depth of field.
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| Photo By: Alex Voronin (Crow)
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Critique By:
Ryan Shawgo (K:152)
6/14/2002 6:21:40 PM
Doh, I missed the check box, here is the photo.
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| Photo By: William R Eastman III
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Critique By:
Ryan Shawgo (K:152)
6/14/2002 6:21:19 PM
I like the forground flowers, I find the background flowers to be distracting. I have attached a photo of what I see. I brought down the crop line on top to loose some of the wasted space on top. I found that doing this helps to balance the negative space.
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| Photo By: William R Eastman III
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Critique By:
Ryan Shawgo (K:152)
6/14/2002 6:14:58 PM
Something that may have worked with this photo would be to pull the model away from the flowers, maybe 10 ft or so, then use the flowers as forground color but much out of focus. The model would have to be standing to make this idea work. I think with both the flowers and the model in sharp focus there is too much distraction.
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| Photo By: William R Eastman III
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Critique By:
Ryan Shawgo (K:152)
1/29/2002 4:17:24 AM
I like this, excellent contact with teh model's eyes. I like the grain and mood it portrays.
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| Photo By: Mike Dixon
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Critique By:
Ryan Shawgo (K:152)
1/11/2002 3:54:08 PM
I must say that I not sure I like the blue. It is deffinately over powering the rest of the image. It took me a while to figure out that the little bitty cart was connected to the big blue parachute. The main image is fairly soft, but the blue and red it too harsh and contrasty for the image to work well.
Ryan
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Photo By: Tony Smallman
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Critique By:
Ryan Shawgo (K:152)
7/27/2001 4:09:34 PM
Excellent work Altaf, I like the softness of the photo and how well it works. I agree with the others, a sharper first flower would completely ruin the mood.
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| Photo By: al shaikh
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