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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
3/24/2006 6:27:44 AM
Hi Janet-
You really have gone floral on us. Hey, give me a call so we can plan a photo field trip, maybe the flower fields in Carlsbad? 5332882. Long beach prefix. I also found a couple of easy
how-to's for making a cheap light box for indoor photography.
Sean
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| Photo By: Janet Garinger
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
3/24/2006 6:12:29 AM
I really like the colour saturation you've achieved here. I thought it might have been phoyoshoped a bit until I saw you used fuji.
Well Done!
Sean
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| Photo By: Roland Lacson
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
3/24/2006 6:09:53 AM
Hugo, thank you so much for this very honest and insightful critique. I knew this photo had problems that's why I posted it. I had not posted in a long time and felt my recent work was a little rusty.
I so wanted this shot to work but needed advice on hoe to improve my future work. I tried going back to the original image and using your composition recommendations, but the image quality just isn't there.
I hope my next round of postings show a progression of improvement.
Thanks again,
Sean(Michael)
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| Photo By: Michael Sean Fleming
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
3/15/2006 6:10:45 AM
Very cool abstract. I like the contrast between light and shadow.
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Photo By: Larry Donnelly
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
3/15/2006 6:07:46 AM
Very intense colour. good contrast against the dark branches.
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| Photo By: Larry Donnelly
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
3/15/2006 3:33:03 AM
The colours here are excellent, as are the details. But I think it is the near perfect depth of field that really make this a standout.
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| Photo By: Oguz Kiziltug
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
3/15/2006 3:30:02 AM
The details on this image are amazing. Each little hair is clearly visable. Outstanding!
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| Photo By: Oguz Kiziltug
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
3/15/2006 3:25:31 AM
you are very talented at capturing beautiful macro's. The details on this cicada are nice and crisp. Well done
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| Photo By: Oguz Kiziltug
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
3/15/2006 3:19:19 AM
very cool abstract Janet. No clue as to what it is, but I still like it.
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| Photo By: Janet Garinger
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
3/15/2006 3:15:23 AM
A very intriguing choice of perspective. It gives the scene an abstract quality. You've also been able to convey a feeling of vertigo with this downward view. Well done.
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| Photo By: ricardo longhi-frantz
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
3/15/2006 3:09:25 AM
Terrific abstract. Very good tones and a pleasing arrangement overall.
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| Photo By: Gustavo Scheverin
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
3/13/2006 8:17:54 PM
Outstanding capture. The colors are great and the play of light on the dew is beautiful. I think the shallow DOF really works for this image.
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| Photo By: Joggie van Staden
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
3/12/2006 6:07:04 AM
You have a good eye for finding abstracts. The colours are very striking and the angles and lines add a lot of drama. Well shot!
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| Photo By: Faika Berat Pehlivan
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
2/7/2006 5:32:12 AM
Wonderful use of forced perspective. The way you cropped your shot gives it a feeling of infinite size.
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| Photo By: Shirley Grove
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
2/25/2005 1:07:59 AM
Outstanding macro.
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| Photo By: Bryan Jarmain
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
2/22/2005 9:08:45 PM
Took your advice and cloned out the other gull.
Let me know what you think.
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| Photo By: Michael Sean Fleming
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
2/21/2005 12:11:10 AM
Outstanding action capture! The colour might be a little too sturated for some tastes, but I think it really makes this photo pop.
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| Photo By: Lucas Guimarães
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
9/30/2004 8:35:54 PM
Roger,
You are right about the black on black clumping. I think a better crop might have included only the two couples on the right.
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| Photo By: Michael Sean Fleming
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
9/29/2004 10:58:09 PM
With the glassy smooth water beautifully reflecting the lights you have captured a perfect summer night
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| Photo By: messiah minasian
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
9/17/2004 8:43:01 PM
Great DOF and outstanding composition. Well done!
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| Photo By: James Bambery
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
9/14/2004 4:40:39 AM
Roger, Thanks for the comment and the link to your very amusing shot. One thing though, he's not my son as there is only a five year differences in our ages. 
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| Photo By: Michael Sean Fleming
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
9/8/2004 8:49:07 PM
You have produced a very alluring image here. The pose is subtly sultry and the setting is unique. well done.
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| Photo By: Terrence Kent
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
9/8/2004 8:45:36 PM
Good use of shallow DOF
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| Photo By: Karen Engelbreth
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
9/8/2004 8:36:24 PM
Beautiful skyscape. the star effect you achieved is very cool.
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| Photo By: Wojciech Wandzel
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
8/26/2004 3:33:23 AM
Jeffrey-
Thanks for the comment. I almost uploaded an uncropped version but I thought the spider got a little lost. See what you think.
Sean
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| Photo By: Michael Sean Fleming
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
8/26/2004 3:03:18 AM
It's like being inside the paperweight. Great clarity on the bubble, wonderful colours.
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| Photo By: Ramiro Pérez Funes
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
8/16/2004 4:55:06 AM
The desaturated look is just right for this image. You have a talent for capturing emotions. Welcome to usefilm, I'm adding you to my friends list so I can track your work.
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| Photo By: Tessa
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
8/13/2004 9:44:54 PM
The forced perspective is awesome! The expressions really give this shot some weight.
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| Photo By: Kim Taylor
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
8/13/2004 9:33:57 PM
This is a very intriguing shot. I've come back to look at it several times. I thought it would look good in B&W, so I took the liberty of converting it in PS. I also cropped out a little of the foregroung that looked washed out in B&W. Hope you like the results.
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| Photo By: Tobiah Deutsch
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Critique By:
Michael Sean Fleming (K:2267)
8/13/2004 6:12:16 AM
Very serene shot. The tones look outstanding.
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