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Critique By:
Maxim Reider (K:383)
2/15/2004 10:26:59 PM
PS. See my comment on your comment on my photo.
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Critique By:
Maxim Reider (K:383)
2/15/2004 10:19:20 PM
Hi Brian! There is good news and bad news. The good news is that you like nature and above all you perceive its emotional appeal - flowers talk to you and you want to tell about it to the rest of the world. The composition is OK - not a revelation but good. The major problem is the lighting. The leaves on the both sides of the flower are distracting. Just imagine how beautiful your becture could have been with the dark green background. I believe that your camea (of which you should not be ashamed) has a b/w option - or you can choose it in your PC. Colors (or colours, if you are British) could be betraying. So to check up a dubious composition one should turn the image into b/w, and if it still works, it's ok. Just look what happened to your beautiful image when greyscaled. So what should we do? Honestly - serious photographers just wait for the right moment of the day and only then shoot.
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Critique By:
Gustavo Eulalio (K:3777)
2/15/2004 10:15:25 PM
Hi Brian. Post more pictures like this one. Great flower, great shot.
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Critique By:
Brian T. Ach (K:1742)
2/15/2004 9:49:51 PM
I am not laughing at that camera...when it can take pictures that sharp and colorful! Have fun with this, look around, and see what is NOT seen...
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Critique By:
Jorg Reif (K:16020)
2/15/2004 9:41:51 PM
Nice moody macro brian, wonderful color composition, nice asymmetric composition, excellent focus. Good work. Regards Jorg
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Critique By:
Rhonda Prince (K:17687)
2/15/2004 9:34:56 PM
Thanks for your comment on my Valentine picture. Speaking of good lighting, the lighting on your flower is great. It looks like the sun is shining out of the center of it. Good job!
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Critique By:
Brian Kinney (K:1208)
2/15/2004 9:20:36 PM
Kristina, thank you! And thank you to everyone aswell...I think I probably found something I might be good at  ...again, thanks, you guys really made me feel "warm and cozy"
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Critique By:
Kristina Kohut (K:49990)
2/15/2004 9:05:59 PM
Oh Brian, thankyou for you very very sweet comment on my butterfly photo! Made me very happy that you liked it so much! :-))
This is a wonderful photo! Not "just" a flower, it's so much more! The light is really fantastic... so warming and strong! And it lits up the flower in a magic way. The lilac colour of the flower is really so beautiful! Also focus is excellent, and the diagonal out of dof background looks great! Very good!
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Critique By:
Robert Jones (K:1692)
2/15/2004 8:45:34 PM
Very beautiful photo, great colors and lighting. Well Done. I agree that just the act of taking pictures is very satisfying.
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Critique By:
Tim Long (K:9228)
2/15/2004 8:16:07 PM
Sunny afternoon after a glorious morning, I suspect. I particularly like the crosshatching of the fence in the background.
One of the beauties of digital seems to be the very high quality images available even from a low-end camera. My two most recent uploads here were taken with a cheapo-matic Visioneer camera (from a maker of cheap scanners, I believe) that has been no end of trouble since I received it, yet I am very pleased with the quality of its images. Keep at it Brian, the fun's in the pursuit. Regards. -Tim
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Critique By:
Marcus Armani (K:36599)
2/15/2004 8:07:20 PM
I have some constuctive criticism, Dont take another picture of this flower, everything about it is perfect, color, depth, lighting...
I think its perfect.....
Great Job
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Critique By:
Alan Armanini (K:5407)
2/15/2004 8:02:25 PM
Great Picture, Good Job!!
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Critique By:
Marcos Duarte (K:15402)
2/15/2004 8:01:13 PM
Belissima foto.
Parabens
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Critique By:
Kevin H (K:22502)
2/15/2004 8:00:47 PM
First off, it's not the equipment the photographer has but the eye for composition. Let me tell you, you got it in this picture. The composition, color, details. It's all there. Keep putting up pictures like this!! Good job
Keep up the good work
Kevin
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