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Critique By:
Getulio Melo (K:6481)
5/29/2004 1:32:34 PM
Amazing hue and composition, John! Beautiful photo. Congrats.
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Critique By:
Linn Currie (K:24426)
5/27/2004 7:22:30 AM
Hi John
May I be frank (again)? :-)
This is not as good as your "Bee Havin". In this new image you don't have a definite point of focus, at least not for my eye. Did you want to draw attention to the beautiful "leopard spots" on the one petal? If so, then I think you should have isolated that and left out most of the flower.
The green leaf is very distrating - it's out of focus and doesn't seem to belong in the image. The flower in the background is also drawing the eye away from the main object. The stamen(is that what it is called?) in the background begs for attention but it should not.
And do you see that tiny bit of white on the right edge? That also catches the eye - you should have cloned that out or cropped a bit tighter.
I hope you don't mind my critique :-) Maybe I have too little experience to be saying any of this, and maybe other members will voice their critique as well - but this is how I perceive it.
Regards
Linn
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Critique By:
Bill Webster (K:1669)
5/27/2004 12:54:26 AM
John, I like the effect here. Nicely done! Regards, ...Bill
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Critique By:
Gerry Pacher (K:7303)
5/25/2004 5:25:14 AM
Dear John, I like this simple but beautiful composition. Looks great.
Regards, Gerry
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Critique By:
Getulio Melo (K:6481)
5/25/2004 5:21:40 AM
What a clear and well composite image! Excellent, John. Congrats.
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Critique By:
Linn Currie (K:24426)
5/25/2004 4:34:16 AM
Morning John
Great to see this winner here :-)
You have my 7 for this one :-)
Linn
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Critique By:
John Jarrell (K:592)
5/25/2004 12:12:49 AM
Thanks again Gustavo
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Critique By:
John Jarrell (K:592)
5/25/2004 12:12:25 AM
Thanks Felipe, I appreciate the comments
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Critique By:
Gustavo Eulalio (K:3777)
5/25/2004 12:08:40 AM
Wonderful shot. Perfect flowers.
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Critique By:
Felipe Woichejosky (K:4766)
5/24/2004 11:45:43 PM
Hi John, beautiful flowers, congratulations! A very good work well composed and executed. 7+
Best wishes, Felipe.
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Critique By:
John Jarrell (K:592)
5/24/2004 11:33:24 PM
Thanks Bill, and yes macro
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Critique By:
Bill Voizin (K:78)
5/24/2004 11:27:09 PM
So simple--so beautiful. Great shot! Macro I presume? Regards, Bill Voizin
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Critique By:
Getulio Melo (K:6481)
5/24/2004 2:44:38 AM
Excellent details and hue! Congrats, John.
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Critique By:
John Jarrell (K:592)
5/23/2004 11:04:25 PM
Thanks Paul and yes I am sure they will behavin
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Critique By:
John Jarrell (K:592)
5/23/2004 11:03:29 PM
Thanks Linn, I appreciate all of the feedback
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
5/23/2004 10:48:02 PM
So, are you saying the bees will be havin a good time inside? 
Colorful, crisp and well framed, John. Very nice.
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Critique By:
Linn Currie (K:24426)
5/23/2004 7:00:16 PM
And so do I :-))
Grrrreat to see you posted this image! :-)
Loved it the first time I saw it, and still loving it :-)
Linn
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Critique By:
Mari Mar (K:11469)
5/21/2004 12:23:08 AM
wonderful!!
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Critique By:
Mari Mar (K:11469)
5/21/2004 12:23:08 AM
wonderful!!
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Critique By:
Linn Currie (K:24426)
5/20/2004 4:04:58 AM
Delicious colour! Wonderful macro, deep and rich - wish I had a flower like that.
Great work.
Linn
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Critique By:
c c (K:13449)
5/20/2004 3:08:29 AM
beautiful shot! I love the colors and the depth. Nicely done!
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Critique By:
Enjoy (K:16125)
5/20/2004 1:19:49 AM
Oh this is really beautiful and I love the color...well done....
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Critique By:
Steven H (K:7142)
5/20/2004 12:46:04 AM
Really good. Unique way of separating foreground and background with a relatively shallow dof . . . verges nicely into the abstract, while retaining the natural beauty.
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Critique By:
Rick Page (K:5242)
5/20/2004 12:22:25 AM
Looks like candles in the middle. Good light.
RICK
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Critique By:
Dan Lightner (K:12684)
5/20/2004 12:16:23 AM
The white stands out very well against the violet /purple color.
Good Detail.
Regards Dan
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Critique By:
Lori Stitt (K:75282)
5/17/2004 2:01:43 AM
How lucky can you get? I have NEVER had a bird's in my yard, or even close for that matter! Really neat photograph! 
Nice 'catch'!!
Lori
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Critique By:
John Jarrell (K:592)
5/15/2004 9:55:05 AM
No, Mom was nearby and very Angry
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Critique By:
John Jarrell (K:592)
5/15/2004 9:44:57 AM
Thanks Dan...Actuall I was at my Parents home and they pointed this out to me. The Mother was nearby and not too hppy that I had decided to watch her children.
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Critique By:
Dan Lightner (K:12684)
5/14/2004 2:09:09 AM
Oh so your in the Robin Business too.Good image .
I like the Trio
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Critique By:
Brian Rueger (K:7341)
5/14/2004 1:13:58 AM
Great shot. I hope the mom was not too far away.
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