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Critique By:
Bill Lange (K:8)
7/7/2001 9:39:14 PM
Debbie,
Not sure what you mean by a digital thingy? :-]
My Olympus digital camera is about $1,400 with lenses and the Canon is about $3,000 without lenses. Expensive thingys.
True color is an oxymoron. I've just started reading about color managment - matching the colors your camera captures to your monitor to the printer - all different. But who cares, as long as it produces a pleasing image.
Color matching/management really matters when you are trying to print something professionally and you want on paper something that comes close to the image you see on your monitor. That is a complex and complicated challenge.
Anyway, thanks for the positive comments on my photos.
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Critique By:
Debbie Groff (K:9569)
7/7/2001 9:24:37 PM
I've noticed alot of digital camera pics come out with really nice colors (true colors). I'm not at all familiar with them, as I just purchased a canon elan 7. I see you can shoot different shutters and aps. I noticed your pic taken with the canon digital..it was true to color as well. I've heard the digital (whaddya call it?) thingy that captures the picture is pretty expensive. I really like the pics taken with the Olympus and Canon tho.
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Critique By:
Debbie Groff (K:9569)
7/7/2001 9:15:20 PM
Oooh Ohhh Ahhh. Beeyooteeful!!!
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Critique By:
Chris Hayward (K:1519)
7/7/2001 8:01:07 PM
When I looked through the thumbnails, this one really jumped out at me. I think it
has to do with the strong yellow-blue contrast and the strong lines. Good shot.
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Critique By:
Artie Colantuono (K:12275)
7/7/2001 6:26:45 AM
Really nice light here bill and a very nice graphic....I'm just gonna suggest you make this more symmetrical as to increase the graphic quality to this image....the right upper rail (top of the "T") is not on the same plane as the left upper which adds tension.....suggest you crop left a bit so the staircase is dead center, exactly dead centered....this should add more balls to the up flow and crossing rails and the line frak at the top....nice image Bill weel seen and handled well....
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Critique By:
Artie Colantuono (K:12275)
7/7/2001 5:32:54 AM
nice frame and light....good concept and really good execution......heavily textured....well done Bill
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Critique By:
Debbie Groff (K:9569)
7/5/2001 6:56:34 AM
Poor Artie. I had to open this one up again, I just love it. Saw what Artie's comment was...poor Artie. (hehe)
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Critique By:
Artie Colantuono (K:12275)
7/5/2001 5:06:16 AM
beautiful light and DOF Bill...colors are rich but not over the top...wish you didnt cut this top off however....do you have it on the frame and you cropped it?
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Critique By:
Artie Colantuono (K:12275)
7/5/2001 5:06:16 AM
Like the framing and light here.....my monitor is highly calibrated and unless Im nuts I dont see a bench....
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Critique By:
Artie Colantuono (K:12275)
7/5/2001 5:06:16 AM
lighting is really cool here Bill as is the subject....the large black wall on the left is pulling this image however...crop the left black to equal the black leading edge on the right...I think this will strengthen this image and build up more power to the shadow lines...nicely seen and captured....
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Critique By:
Artie Colantuono (K:12275)
7/5/2001 5:06:16 AM
Very BACK TO BASIC abstract....very well framed...good lighting....Creative idea and very well executed....VERY NICE JOB...William
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/4/2001 11:01:41 PM
Interesting perspective. I love the light and the composition. I agree with Debbie on the bench.
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Critique By:
Debbie Groff (K:9569)
7/4/2001 9:13:20 PM
This is just beautiful. If a I were to have to say anything at all, like what might make it better, the only thing I might change is to crop from the sidewalk, leaving just the bench. A straight line from one fence post to the next and on down the line. I understand that may not be do-able because of the angle, but that's just a suggestion. For me to take a picutre with such beauty...there's no telling what I would have come up with. So... I just have to say once again...Beautiful.
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Critique By:
Chris Whaley (K:3847)
7/4/2001 8:04:02 PM
Nice color and lines.
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Critique By:
Chris Whaley (K:3847)
7/4/2001 8:02:33 PM
Busy with intersecting lines....love it.
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Critique By:
Chris Whaley (K:3847)
7/4/2001 8:00:46 PM
This is very cool...unique image perspective...I like how the rail is close..feels like I am standing there...nice muted tones...the blue caps add a very nice touch..only minor whine is the bench being cut off....but a super job none the less.
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Critique By:
al shaikh (K:15790)
7/4/2001 6:33:54 AM
I'm really surprised at the lack of comments on such a great image, I really love abstracts and this works well, I'm kicking it back up to the comments page so you can get more feedback.
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Critique By:
Brian McCarthy (K:49)
6/18/2001 12:27:31 PM
Wonderful. Great colour and composition. Truly a 'stairway to heaven'.
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Critique By:
Chris Whaley (K:3847)
5/27/2001 6:51:34 AM
Very very nice....pleasant to view.
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Critique By:
Chris Blaszczyk (K:610)
5/12/2001 10:31:49 PM
Smokin' Ladder 
Very well done! Love everything here. Yes, it would also maka a good B&W. Regards.
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Critique By:
Chris Whaley (K:3847)
5/2/2001 6:44:30 PM
Nice mood William. Frustrating telephone lines do get in the way of many nice subjects. Maybe you could go back and cut the poles down?...tempting isn't it.....Good shot nonetheless.
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Critique By:
Shelly N Alexander (K:1451)
5/1/2001 1:07:08 PM
I love this shot. I am very big on fog and the way it hides things while creating moods. Good work.
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Critique By:
Richard Walters (K:480)
4/27/2001 4:42:56 PM
Well done William, you use that camera well. I considered buying that same camera. Let me know if you start a homepage. I'd love to see higher resolutions of your work.
Email me directly with attachments as big as you like of some of your prized images. Let me know if you'd like me to do the same ( richard@jam.rr.com ) or better yet take a gander thru my homepage:
http:home.jam.rr.com/richimages
Again, Nice Work!
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Critique By:
Bill Lange (K:8)
4/23/2001 9:53:16 AM
I was so taken with the detail of the rust on this hook that I wanted to get as close as I could and capture the image handheld and put it in some context.
Good suggestions.
Besides a photoclass I took last year and got one on one feedback from the instructor, these comments have been most educational.
Thanks again everyone
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Critique By:
Bill Lange (K:8)
4/23/2001 9:47:37 AM
You have an excellent eye. I will work on those points.
Your remarks are "obvious" after you make them, but not that obvious to me when I worked with these images.
Thanks again for taking the time to comment.
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Critique By:
Bill Lange (K:8)
4/23/2001 9:40:15 AM
Artie,
You are right on. I was so taken with tracks disappearing into the fog and the trees that I didn't "see" the pole and wires.
When I tried to take out the pole and wires using PhotoShop something was missing. Goodfeedback
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Critique By:
Artie Colantuono (K:12275)
4/23/2001 5:32:33 AM
Texture of the wall is excellent. Concept is nice and composition is ok. Clone out the spot of light on the right of the ball, its distracting and not needed. A little more space on the right would add to this image also. If this is in your house you can easily redo it.
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Critique By:
Artie Colantuono (K:12275)
4/23/2001 5:28:00 AM
Nice feel to this William. you need the top of the eye in this and definitely the bottom of the hook. Or at least the bottom of the hook with a little space under it.
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Critique By:
al shaikh (K:15790)
4/23/2001 5:28:00 AM
This works really well, a lot of energy and a ton of things for your eye to wander through, very nice job.
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Critique By:
Artie Colantuono (K:12275)
4/23/2001 2:37:09 AM
And William Lange scores a winning Abstract........
Great job.
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