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Critique By:
Giuliano Guarnieri (K:36622)
4/14/2005 6:59:44 PM
I think you achive the target!
Readable brand, perfect background and a correct (and clever) use of the DOF.
When do you post some more other?
One year after... not bad as a return 
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Critique By:
Geoff Simmons (K:264)
3/17/2005 5:45:07 AM
I would sink the knife a little deeper, personally
Great lighting, and cool environment
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Critique By:
Matt Pals (K:1722)
9/28/2004 7:05:35 PM
Water in varying forms... great idea! I assume there was nothing spectacular about the colour? looks great in b/w. however i cant help but wonder what is just outside the frame.
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Critique By:
Stephen Bivens (K:7308)
8/25/2004 4:31:21 AM
Great shot. Thanks for the info on low light.
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Critique By:
Robert Adams (K:-1272)
6/25/2004 1:12:39 AM
Good work on lighting.
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Critique By:
Robert Adams (K:-1272)
6/25/2004 12:44:32 AM
Great composition, Simple but speaks loud.
Excellent!
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Critique By:
Peter Witkop (K:3189)
6/23/2004 8:17:24 PM
This was an evening shot, maybe 6:30 or 7 in july IIRC, it was a couple of years ago.
Peter
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Critique By:
Robert Adams (K:-1272)
6/23/2004 2:22:19 AM
Good composition, morning or evening?
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Critique By:
Robert Adams (K:-1272)
6/23/2004 2:20:22 AM
I like the long exsposure shots on streams, and thanks for looking at my portrait photo yesterday, I am just starting on my pro career. Please add me to your friends list. Thanks
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Critique By:
gregory J. mclemore (K:1810)
6/15/2004 8:36:38 PM
beautiful shot and thanks for the advice regarding photography school
regards
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Critique By:
Chuck Freeman (K:13616)
6/8/2004 11:09:59 PM
Excellent photo and great camera and film.
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Critique By:
Andrew Romaneschi (K:335)
5/18/2004 12:50:29 AM
Peter,
This is an excellent Photograph Peter! Great detail and exposuse timing. Keep up the good work.
Andrew
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Critique By:
Richard Dakin (K:12915)
5/8/2004 3:25:13 AM
Excellent variance in textures. Exposure looks dead on.
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Critique By:
Jim Budrakey (K:24393)
4/23/2004 1:50:56 AM
I like your composition but I would like to see a bit more contrast.
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Critique By:
Jani Salvataggio (K:27283)
4/22/2004 5:24:57 PM
Great work!!!! very good composition!!
regards
Jani
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Critique By:
Peter Witkop (K:3189)
4/21/2004 5:22:35 PM
Hugo-
Yup, emotionless it cernainly is, but you're right, that's part of the assignment, straight catalog photography. The point of the assignment was two fold, one to make us deal with the same object over and over to really understand how to light it well, and then to think about how backgrounds relate to and work with the subject. One shot had to be 'enviromental', two backgrounds had to be specular, and one shot had to be to a specific aspect ratio. I'll post the rest of the series as I get them scaned.
Peter
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Critique By:
Hugo de Wolf (K:185110)
4/21/2004 9:56:10 AM
Hi Peter, A very clean shot, but a rather "emotionless" one. Obviously, that's also part of the assignment. I'd like to see the other backgrounds, I presume the goal is to create a unity within the series? That would be interesting to see. As a stand alone, I think this shot would do very well on a on line shopping website, but it is a bit dull.
Cheers,
Hugo
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Rodrigo Bari (K:285)
4/21/2004 4:48:12 AM
I like the this contrast between sky and sand.
Good exposition, beauty composition!
congrats!
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Critique By:
Carmem A. Busko (K:48785)
3/15/2004 9:24:56 PM
wonderful waterfall composition! I?d like to see it in colors.
Regards!
Carmem
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Critique By:
John McCallum (K:1856)
3/14/2004 6:46:14 PM
Excellent. Having recently acquired my own 4x5 and having had a long love of B&W, I am now longing to be able to turn my contact prints in 16x20s! But getting an enlarger that is capable of more than 35mm & med format down this way (New Zealand) is not easy (or cheap).
Like your work, can't wait to see more!
catch you John.
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Critique By:
Peter Witkop (K:3189)
3/14/2004 6:29:30 PM
Thanks for the comment John. I do my own 4x5 B&W developing and printing, this is acctually a scan of the neg though with just contrast/brightness adjustments. This is in the large stack of negs (that only seems to grow) that I want to make a descent fiber prints from.
Peter
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Critique By:
John McCallum (K:1856)
3/14/2004 6:19:09 PM
Superb abstract Peter. Really enjoy looking at it (and in my view that's a sign of a good abstract). Excellent printing - do you do your own with 4x5? regards, John
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Critique By:
Kazik Janeczko (K:1558)
3/7/2004 10:05:24 AM
Great work. Very dynamic presentation.
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Critique By:
Tim Bronkhorst (K:9391)
2/16/2004 8:26:00 AM
Wonderfull scene. Maybe a little to dark.
Thanks for the forum reply!
Greets Tim.
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Critique By:
Tyler Russell (K:1148)
2/12/2004 12:50:43 AM
Great photo.
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Critique By:
Mr. Arrey (K:11516)
12/16/2003 12:38:56 AM
This is a very nice image and I like the colours.
Thanks for your contribution to my question.
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Critique By:
Peter Witkop (K:3189)
10/26/2003 11:52:46 AM
Thanks for the comments! This is the upper penobscot bay in downeast maine, I believe it was in the town of Penobscot.
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Critique By:
Pedro Libório (K:36301)
10/26/2003 9:27:37 AM
lovely done!
should be bigger!
regards.
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Critique By:
Sarah Hansegard (K:4332)
10/25/2003 8:59:46 PM
Lovely perspective!! If there is a way you could sharpen the image up a little-that would be my only suggestion...
I'm off to check out your portfolio-
This is wonderful! Where was this taken?
Regards-
Sarah
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