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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/26/2003 12:15:22 PM
Thomas,
A really nice shot, I do think the model's right eye is a bit out of focus. Also the right part of the nose is a bit overexposed which causes a loss of detail there.
Roderik
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| Photo By: Thomas Paul
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/26/2003 12:13:16 PM
Becky,
I agree with Stefan on this one, you might get a crop of the insect, it would then seem ( I think) that the bug is sitting on a yellow wavy sea.
If you look well to my butterfly series you will find that it is all the same butterfly... just used at different angles etc. Thank you for your comment, I will certainly be experimenting more.
Roderik
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| Photo By: Becky V
(K:9699)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/26/2003 12:07:03 PM
Roberto,
La vita e bella indeed... Very nice shot, lovely colours and smile.
Roderik
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Photo By: Roberto Arcari Farinetti
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/25/2003 1:32:31 PM
Banchie,
Lovely shot. Very nice composition. IMHO it would be nice if the cat was also looking in the camera. Also the top left part is overexposed, which causes a bit of glare.
Roderik
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| Photo By: Banchie Banchie
(K:866)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/25/2003 1:11:24 PM
Becky,
A very nice shot. It does seem a bit unnatural but as Kim already stated that makes it a great poster. You really have to watch twice before you can make up your mind up on what is 'wrong' with it (I can't find anything wrong with it, but still, this shot has to be looked at at least twice... ;-) ).
Thnx for your comments on my shot as well, I've immediately started shooting some more.
Roderik
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| Photo By: Becky V
(K:9699)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/25/2003 1:07:41 PM
Spencer,
Thanks for your comment on my 'Never fly away again' *series* :-). I immediatly tried some new shots and see the improvement myself. I hope you like it too. As always, experimenting, like yourself, is what we should do to keep our mind and fingers sharp...
I like your shot here, because it is very different from most things you usually see. Maybe next time you can let someone open the door and see if that adds even more to this shot?
Roderik
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| Photo By: Spencer E.
(K:4032)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/25/2003 12:52:28 PM
Jal,
Great shot you've got here! I really like the colours the Rebel produces.
Roderik
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| Photo By: jal s
(K:105)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/25/2003 8:03:43 AM
Very original indeed, Ana.
Good job,
Roderik
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| Photo By: ana ribeiro
(K:21290)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/25/2003 7:38:34 AM
I hope I am not stating the obvious... something might have gone wrong...? :-)
Welcome to UseFilm.com though, Erin.
Roderik
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| Photo By: Erin Fields
(K:22)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/25/2003 7:30:20 AM
Lukasz,
This is a nice shot. I really like the colours though they might be a bit brighter (maybe do some levels/curves in PS) and the image lacks some sharpness (maybe from scanning).
Roderik
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| Photo By: Lukasz Rzepinski (Łukasz Rzepiński)
(K:1211)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/24/2003 12:56:15 PM
Lucas,
Indeed very nice lines. I do think the papers on the desk are a bit overexposed, try looking at the histogram of this image and notice that there are parts way too much to the right.
Roderik
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| Photo By: Lucas L
(K:12145)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/24/2003 11:52:25 AM
Marcel,
Excellent shot. Very good job!
Roderik
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| Photo By: Marcel Laurens
(K:3654)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/24/2003 8:50:21 AM
magnificent work! this is beautiful! the composition and the colors are impeccable! beautiful landscape.
;-)
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| Photo By: John Myers
(K:4308)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/23/2003 1:34:19 PM
What did I deserve this rating for? With no explanation?
Anyone care to explain?
Roderik
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| Photo By: Roderik Koenders
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/23/2003 1:11:50 PM
Carl,
I am not really sure if John has completely lost his mind (?), as you probably know this is just a piece of sky. I've also taken lots of pieces of sky just to put in a folder I appropiately call "sky". I always look back to this folder when I don't like the sky on a particular background and would like to change it with a sky in my folder.
But hey... that's just what I do. :-) Good luck with experimentating, it's always worth it in the long run.
Roderik
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| Photo By: Carl Sanders
(K:99)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/23/2003 1:07:47 PM
Tanja,
I can't really explain it but it seems to me it is a composition done in PS. Why? Because the door is really sharp and the bottom part is really fuzzy. This shouldn't be the caze because they are in the same plane. Or am I just completely wrong?
Roderik
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| Photo By: Tanja Lang
(K:34)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/23/2003 8:43:28 AM
Mohammed,
Excellent shot with a huge impact.
Roderik
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| Photo By: mohammed al turki
(K:2)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/23/2003 8:23:10 AM
Pat,
Great capture. Very good job, I really like the girls expression.
Roderik
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| Photo By: Pat Fruen
(K:12076)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/23/2003 4:03:56 AM
Great shot, Lorinda. Lovely framing as well, a really nice finishing touch.
Roderik
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| Photo By: Lorinda Millar
(K:2580)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/23/2003 3:49:06 AM
Thomas, this shot requires great skill and expertise. You did a wonderful job. Is the shutter speed really just 1/200 sec? Shouldn't it be more in the 1/2000 sec. range?
Roderik
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| Photo By: Thomas Kirchen
(K:7)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/20/2003 11:19:39 AM
Great perspective!
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| Photo By: Adam
(K:21)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/19/2003 2:01:00 PM
Excellent sharp eyes! Wonderful.
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| Photo By: Ivan N. Prgonjic
(K:3053)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/19/2003 10:59:46 AM
Thanks for the hint. Really helpful.
Roderik
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| Photo By: Phillip Filtz
(K:1792)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/19/2003 10:58:34 AM
Another great shot, Phillip. I really like her expression on this one, she almost looks surprised. Lovely skin tones again as well.
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| Photo By: Phillip Filtz
(K:1792)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/19/2003 10:57:10 AM
Teunis,
Great colours in this shot. I like the insect there, it makes the shot even more interesting. Where did you shoot it anyway...? De Veluwe?
Roderik
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| Photo By: Teunis Haveman
(K:37426)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/19/2003 10:37:37 AM
Kalle,
A funny shot for a boring evening. ;-) Why not let the eyes speak more by opening them. You could also make a compostion shot with all different expressions next to each other.
Just a thought,
Roderik
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| Photo By: kalle kulmala
(K:4)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/19/2003 10:18:36 AM
Very nice shot. I like the original composition.
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| Photo By: Jytte Kristensen
(K:446)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/19/2003 6:19:19 AM
Great shot. Is that spot just right above the sun part of the image or part of the lens?
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| Photo By: Maurilio Ultramari
(K:8200)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/19/2003 5:28:22 AM
Lovely PS work. Keep up the good work. BTW Is it just me or are there a lot of compression artefacts along the sides of the rose?
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| Photo By: Daniel case
(K:756)
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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
11/19/2003 3:22:30 AM
Alex,
Very funny shot. However it misses something, maybe something dynamic. Maybe you can experiment a bit with the wind filter in PS.
Good luck, Roderik
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| Photo By: alex hodges
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