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Critique By:
Roderik Koenders (K:2740)
10/7/2008 5:14:17 PM
Hi Vera,
Wow, this image really works for me. The moment you captured is really great. I really like how so many of the elements in this picture point at the main subject.
You could think of a few ways to make the image more dramatic though. I think first of all a crop to focus more on the main subject would be nice. Also by cropping you can remove the subject from its very central position and put him in a more dramatic composition by putting him on a third of the image.
Then you could also make the hallway behind him a bit darker to make him pop out more.
I have attached an image to show you what I mean. I simply cropped, adjusted the levels and tweaked a bit the curves dialogues. After that I desaturated a bit. Of course you have the original so you can do that much better. It is just to give you an impression, hopefully well received :-).
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| Photo By: Vera Paulin
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
10/7/2008 3:37:49 PM
Buen retrato, muy emotivo.
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia (K:96391)
10/3/2008 3:25:04 AM
great capture
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| Photo By: Vera Paulin
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Critique By:
Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia (K:96391)
10/3/2008 3:23:15 AM
Gorgeous. 7++++++++++++=
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Critique By:
Agung Kurniawan (K:219)
10/3/2008 3:05:22 AM
nice composition... kurang tajam yach... (IMHO)... salam
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Critique By:
tabi mahmoud (K:2270)
9/21/2008 1:01:47 PM
nice shot..
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