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Critique By:
Bonnie Mancini (K:51)
8/5/2003 1:43:22 PM
Make sure you are intentional about what you want the viewer to notice about your photos. In this situation you could either focus closer on their faces for a sympathetic portrait, or stand back just a bit so you capture all those little bare feet: an equally interesting view. cutting off feet and heads is the worst! Their faces are beautiful.
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| Photo By: Marcus Ripley
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Critique By:
Bonnie Mancini (K:51)
8/5/2003 1:39:56 PM
This shows your eye for photography -though it is out of focus, not detailed, and not contrasting enough for my taste the composition -the way you have croped it is excellent.
also I would have wanted the other shaddow out of there because unless it were detailed enough to see that it was annother person it becomes only a distraction.
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| Photo By: Marcus Ripley
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Critique By:
Bonnie Mancini (K:51)
8/5/2003 1:34:23 PM
This photo is realy stimulating, I like it. There is so much going on it it though -I would have taken about 20 more photos of this view -just zooming in on the little exciting things going on such as the right hand wall and the glass reflecting infront of it, or thetables in a row or the lines of the windows, or the floor's reflection.
Focus in on these details one at a time and it will improve your overall composition because you will know exactly what you want to be seen and what you want to leave out.
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| Photo By: Marcus Ripley
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Critique By:
deniz kaan copur (K:12726)
7/29/2003 11:16:36 AM
very nice.
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| Photo By: Marcus Ripley
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Critique By:
Terry Irwin (K:979)
7/28/2003 9:50:06 AM
I like how it turned out too! I love the blured feeling the struggle of focus or the heat rising from the ground fuzzes her out. The soft line at the bottom complements the line of her shadow. Very nice shot!
Cheers!
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| Photo By: Marcus Ripley
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Critique By:
Nabil Majid (K:2073)
7/27/2003 10:42:04 AM
Nice composition. The lighting focuses on the windows (lighter) than on the main subject (at the midground, I assume)
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| Photo By: Marcus Ripley
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Critique By:
Anna Aichinger (K:4921)
7/27/2003 10:13:46 AM
i like the clean cool atmosphere....
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| Photo By: Marcus Ripley
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Critique By:
Joann Winborn (K:12550)
7/25/2003 8:32:51 PM
Nicely done. Looks like they're playing "Follow the Leader"
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| Photo By: Marcus Ripley
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Critique By:
Mário Sousa (K:16985)
7/25/2003 8:46:37 AM
excellent photo
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| Photo By: Marcus Ripley
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Critique By:
Mário Sousa (K:16985)
7/24/2003 11:10:18 AM
excellent
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| Photo By: Marcus Ripley
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Critique By:
Paolo Barthelemy (K:25552)
7/24/2003 10:10:08 AM
Hi and welcome to this community!
About the shot: the girl's face is well exposed and the composition is good but I would completely remove the empty dark, left part making a portrait orientation. The chair beyond the girl is a bit disturbing but the mother's (?) hands working enhance the shot's mood.
IMHO, I would also like to see a bigger image.
Keep on going!
Regards, Y.D.
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