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Critique By:
Peter Zahoran (K:88)
6/27/2003 10:00:54 AM
1. you could warm up the colors a little
2. the oof tree in the background distracts a lot (it's growing out of the boys head) moving just a few steps to the right would help this.
3. a bit of saturation would help
4. the composition is too central and it doesn't work well here. I'd crop from the right.
on the other hand:
1. excelent capture
2. very telling expression on the boys face!
A very nice shot!
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| Photo By: Steve Bottom
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Critique By:
Peter Zahoran (K:88)
6/7/2003 7:26:36 AM
Its a very nice timing, the expression on the womans face is nice. The guy could have been lit a bit more, he's almost a shilouette. I would suggest retaking the shot in more harsh lights or using strobes. Lastly, the background is very distracting. Use a big apperture and a short tele for narrower DoF or change viewpoint.
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| Photo By: Kim Taylor
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