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Critique By:
Robert Bernhard (K:72)
4/8/2004 12:09:34 PM
<< This image woulf have benifitted from a greater DOF. Nice idea... >>
I don't think it would. Actually, what I think would be the better shot would be to have everything in focus and then in photoshop blur selective parts of the image.
If I had enough DOF to get the cars in focus, the scene would be more cluttered and distracting, I think. All those trees and the parking lot in focus would not let the arm stand out as well.
Sadly, I won't ever get this shot again, as my friend is moving out of his apt. in Miami very soon.
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| Photo By: Robert Bernhard
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Critique By:
Robert Bernhard (K:72)
3/13/2004 2:30:28 PM
Andreas,
You can see more photos from those rolls here:
http://www.bernhard.us/photos/armyreunion03
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| Photo By: Robert Bernhard
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Critique By:
Robert Bernhard (K:72)
3/12/2004 1:23:29 PM
I'd really really like to know how you got the sun to line up like that, right on the edge.... amazing.
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| Photo By: John Strazza
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Critique By:
Robert Bernhard (K:72)
3/12/2004 9:44:44 AM
The photoshoped sky does little to enhance this image, other than to reinforce the fact that we're not looking at anything "real." I don't think it helps this image at all. The dark lower-left corner is distracting, as it keeps pulling the eye away from the subjects.
My usual 2 cents.
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| Photo By: Marcy Massura
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Critique By:
Robert Bernhard (K:72)
10/28/2003 8:59:47 AM
I have to agree with Deniz. There's too much empty sky in this image. Otherwise, a very interesting shot and a good use of the fisheye.
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| Photo By: Fernando Carello
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Critique By:
Robert Bernhard (K:72)
10/17/2003 10:25:33 PM
Alex and Andreas,
Thanks for the comments! 
Andreas,
On the Holga, ~f/16 is "sunny" and ~f/8 is "cloudy"
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Critique By:
Robert Bernhard (K:72)
10/3/2003 2:42:56 PM
Gabriele,
Yeah, this does warrent some more film, to try and nail the balance. I think a better application of the Rule of Thirds on my part could help. If I placed the ball dead center it would have seemed cliche, I think.
Only one way to find out I guess. Now I just have to find a decent garden with a gazing ball near my house and not one that's over 2000 miles away!
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| Photo By: Robert Bernhard
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Critique By:
Robert Bernhard (K:72)
10/3/2003 1:29:15 PM
Things I should have done to improve the shot:
1) Cleaned the gazing ball. The fingerprints are noticable and detract from the image.
2) Taken more shots! I only took this one shot, sort of a "I wonder if..." sort of thing. I am happy with it, but with all the color around me, I should have explored shooting this as a subject more.
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| Photo By: Robert Bernhard
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Critique By:
Robert Bernhard (K:72)
8/4/2003 8:32:23 PM
Just curious, why is this under "Toy Camera" ?
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