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Critique By:
Mike Jones (K:696)
10/17/2003 8:18:22 AM
I like the choice of background. However all comments about the girl are right on. Her suit is white so the headlight makes her butt look too big (they blend to become one). Also the shadow on her back blends with the background giving her a freakishly small waist. The dramatic blue swirl in the background is a nice choice - it looks as if the photo was taken outdoors under a blue sky ?! (with maybe a tree on the left and your garage/house on the right ? Actually - was the girl added afterwards ? The chrome is so shiny - hard to tell by your angle - but I don't see her reflection (it's possible she is right in front of it).
Nice job -keep it up.
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Critique By:
Sukru SAGLAM (K:1117)
4/13/2003 6:48:54 AM
Good Car Bad Girl..!
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Critique By:
GJ Noni (K:992)
3/4/2003 10:53:22 AM
One other thing,,I see a lot of PS photos here ( I call them touched up),,,,and this photo, obviously two photos in one with a background,is very good art.....I can not figure out the low ratings,I gave it an 8! I guess if it is not a sunset with water, a barn, a bridge, or a tree it does not rate,,lol
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Critique By:
GJ Noni (K:992)
3/4/2003 10:32:00 AM
Very nice piece of art work,,,,,,I disagree with Scott on the "head room" but agree about her "rear placement." If she were a tad to the right,,,,,,
Nice work here Gary.
(I would have put the copywrite in lower right or none at all instead of over the girls head)
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Critique By:
Scott McFadden (K:5663)
3/4/2003 1:05:05 AM
Ok Im Jealous !
As for the image I like the color on the car
and the addition of a human interest.
there are problems with the placement though not that big.
since the headlight makes the ladys butt look just plain wierd.
I prefer to see a ground level or some kind of base.
and maybe the interior mirror could be turned a little more.
Also the model looks a little cramped without head room.
there is a guide of heard of suggesting 2 times the space above the head as below.
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Critique By:
GJ Noni (K:992)
3/3/2003 7:13:26 PM
Nice idea,,,,,I am wondering if maybe shot from a little more to the left and some more foreground?
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Critique By:
Kelly Cooper (K:222)
3/1/2003 8:39:08 PM
I really like the colors here. Great Job!
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Critique By:
GJ Noni (K:992)
3/1/2003 7:46:56 PM
Nice shot, good color and composition,,,,,
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