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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
9/21/2004 3:09:13 PM
This is great. I love the tonality.
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
9/4/2004 7:11:29 AM
Thanks a lot guys - I really do appreciate the help (and honesty).
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| Photo By: Ben Johnson
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
9/3/2004 8:29:01 PM
Ok, so - if I were to reshoot it - what changes would need to be made? Is the problem in the subject of the picture itself (as in - taken by any photographer the photo has no chance) or is it the technical side (perspective etc...)
Can you give me some more detail on how I would go about making this thing decent?
I really do appreciate honest criticism.
Ben.
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| Photo By: Ben Johnson
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
9/3/2004 5:55:52 PM
Now THAT's what I'm looking for...
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| Photo By: Ben Johnson
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
9/3/2004 1:38:23 PM
I think the better question might have been: Does it NEED a crop...
At first glance I felt that it did - but I can't see how to do it - and I might just be second guessing myself.
While I do respect the fact that this IS my photo - this website is ABOUT commentary - and any would be appreciated!
Ben.
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| Photo By: Ben Johnson
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
9/2/2004 9:31:14 PM
Great shutter - love the tonality.
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| Photo By: Jakub Butkiewicz
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
8/23/2004 8:49:18 PM
I really like your crop. If the bubble on the right side of the big leaf were in focus, it would dominate the image - which isn't what I would be going for. On the other hand, the sharp drop from focus to blur on the leftmost leaf is somewhat jarring. I like it (and the BW tones are great).
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| Photo By: A.T. Sarazin
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
8/23/2004 8:44:32 PM
It's the pants that make it art...
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| Photo By: Thilo Bayer
(K:50358)
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
4/1/2004 11:19:17 PM
Amazing eyes.
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| Photo By: herwig b
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
3/30/2004 3:28:24 PM
Absolutely love it. The tonality and structure is great.
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| Photo By: A. W. Osnafotos
(K:6373)
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
3/17/2004 12:04:32 PM
Amazing DOF, absolutely love the composition and the colors.
The contrast in the trees adds to the dramatic color effect.
Great job.
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| Photo By: sylwester cwalinski
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
3/17/2004 12:00:56 PM
Great colors and a good crop too!
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| Photo By: Christian Barrette
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
1/11/2004 11:25:27 AM
It is very, very good. I like how the tonality on the face is not strong enough to take away from the eyes. It also looks natural. Exceptional work.
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| Photo By: barbara
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
1/11/2004 11:22:54 AM
The sense of emotion I get from this photo is extraordinary. I think the lighting is well placed, and is not too overwhelming (you can still see the ripples on the water). Good work.
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| Photo By: Mitchell Miller
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
1/11/2004 10:45:54 AM
I agree with Rafael. The boats in the background serve to balance the composition so much that it seems expected that there would be something on the right side. The change would not have to have been dramatic - a slight move of one of the foreground ships would have done it. Great colors!
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| Photo By: Rod McLeod
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
1/11/2004 10:42:43 AM
I find the darkness of the front mountain somewhat distracting - it makes the foreground the focal point. But other then that, absolutely stunning. It's not often you can capture something so perfect.
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| Photo By: kita mcintosh
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
1/11/2004 10:39:37 AM
It's very good. Book looks interesting too. If I were to make any changes, I would investigate the possibility of removing the brown gradient on the top left of the photo. Other then that, I think the slight pixilation on the bottom right makes the photo. Great work!
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| Photo By: martin wright
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Critique By:
Ben Johnson (K:140)
2/17/2003 6:00:13 PM
Reminds me of Maddison County.
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| Photo By: ROBERT G. DAVIS
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