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Critique By:
heather martino (K:3648)
1/23/2003 2:13:45 AM
what a lovely clean keyboard!
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| Photo By: chen lin andrew
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Critique By:
Megan Forbes (K:4617)
1/23/2003 12:52:15 AM
Lol - in love with your laptop? Nice shot of the "K", even the spec of dust is clear. Good idea 
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| Photo By: chen lin andrew
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Critique By:
Curt Gentry (K:23)
1/10/2003 9:02:04 PM
Very nice coloring in this photo. I like the framing as well. Good job!
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| Photo By: chen lin andrew
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Critique By:
chen lin andrew (K:36)
1/10/2003 12:48:33 AM
Thanks eddy, I'll consider your comment next time.
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Critique By:
chen lin andrew (K:36)
1/10/2003 12:06:36 AM
Thanks eddy, I'll consider your comment next time.
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Critique By:
eddy surya (K:18)
1/9/2003 11:45:16 PM
I would like to comment your photo, the object is quite good but the color of the sky (background) is too dark, its because you took the picture late in the evening. I think the bright blue sky will make your pic more interesting.
About the rock below the pic, since its not a very good object, its better if you focus your pic to the sky above. OK thats it for me.
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Critique By:
Marc Gougenheim (K:5398)
11/28/2002 7:37:38 PM
Hello. Still no comment, so I'll give it a try. The problem here is that the main flower is small and in the center of the shot. It breaks an elementary compsition rule. But let's try to understand this rule, rather than just reciting it... The center is a place of importance. The decision to represent a particular element small in a picture means that we do not see it as important. So, a small subject in the center means it is at the same time important and not important - a direct contradiction.
Another 3 issues about this image are:
1) that the flower in ce center also competes with the 2 other flowers, which have stronger colors.
2) that the stam of the central flower blocks the viewing of the one (another contradiction: do we want to see it or not ?)
3) That the whole picture has no sharp element.
A cruel critique, sorry. But keep up the moral and try to raise the bar, to be simply more demanding with each photo you take. That's the most important part of the job. Best regards.
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