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Critique By:
jean E marre (K:1577)
5/28/2003 5:12:19 AM
the closed eyes, the expression on their mouths... they describe the title of your photograph realy well. i'm not sure about the grain, but maybe that's just personal taste. apart from that... excellent capture!
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
jean E marre (K:1577)
5/28/2003 5:10:21 AM
nice foggy image. i like the overall blue color. that gives the image that particular atmosphere. good job!
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Günter Koth (K:13841)
5/28/2003 12:14:25 AM
Fantastic tones and lighting. Great mood. Regards, Günter.
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
amy douglas (K:425)
5/27/2003 4:59:41 PM
Lovely and emotive.
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Alex Belfi (K:3344)
5/27/2003 3:57:49 PM
Very deep atmosphere!
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
karen clarke (K:18893)
5/27/2003 3:33:44 PM
Nice work!
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Luis (K:1445)
5/27/2003 2:49:32 PM
Buena imagen con una excelente atmósfera. Sinceramente me hubiera gustado verla más en sus colores originales. Un abrazo.
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Masahiko Shibata (K:14107)
5/26/2003 4:16:22 PM
Beautiful! Calm!
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Günter Koth (K:13841)
5/26/2003 8:56:14 AM
Wonderful composition and lighting and nice tones. Great mood.
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Gregoir Hoppenbrouwers (K:1073)
5/26/2003 8:29:42 AM
Fine composition with a good mood !!
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Dennis Donohue (K:-78)
5/26/2003 6:35:44 AM
Very Nice image!
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Yiannis Gabrilis (K:2548)
5/26/2003 6:24:50 AM
Nice atmosphere , good lighting nicely composed.
Regards
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Fabrizio Dutto (K:944)
5/26/2003 6:23:51 AM
Great light! Some elements of disturb on the left, a black piece of wood, and on the right a green leaf (personal opinion). bye. nice work!
if you want please look my works and give me your opinion, bye!
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Lucas Macedo (K:12843)
5/26/2003 6:21:52 AM
Wonderful shot, Jerred. Perfect mood! Congrats! ..... Lucas
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Nino Gemmellaro (K:1642)
5/26/2003 6:17:57 AM
Excellent shot. Womderful lighting and perspective.
Regards, Nino.
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Lorenzo Lessi (K:6589)
5/26/2003 6:14:50 AM
Superb mood with this light! As already said, the leaf on foreground should be removed from this beautiful picture...
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Martin Ouellet (K:80)
5/26/2003 6:00:56 AM
I just LOVE this kind of mood. The colors, the mist, the shape of the trees... The ONLY thing that is a bit distracting is the foreground having a leaf on the right and a branch on the left. Otherwise, superb work.
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Bjorn Beheydt (K:12096)
5/26/2003 5:57:01 AM
Very moody picture
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
luisa vassallo (K:28230)
5/26/2003 5:46:17 AM
very, very, very, very good!
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Luis Costa - Lucaz (K:9205)
5/17/2003 3:56:11 PM
Very nice work, regards!
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Kyle Cottman (K:112)
3/30/2003 10:13:00 AM
DAMN...what a photo...u nailed this one....it really says LOVE
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Jerred Zegelis (K:72)
10/28/2002 1:36:55 PM
Thank you all for your help and comments!
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Jon Rank (K:683)
10/28/2002 5:19:58 AM
You've really captured the undieing loyalty of the dog. Good job.
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Sarah Needham (K:2482)
10/28/2002 1:41:54 AM
Lovely expression on this dog's face.
I sometimes have the same problem with DOF and my dog. You want to get the length of the nose from the eyes in focus, but have the background blurred. It's not easy, I usually focus on the eye and, if I'm using 50-70ish mm lens, set an aperture of about f.5.6 (minimum). It also helps if the dog's face is slightly to the side, so the nose doesn't point out to the front so much.
Having said all this, I really like this image.
Sarah
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Sue O'S (K:12878)
10/27/2002 5:28:32 PM
Oops! "SHE" is a sweet subject!
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Jerred Zegelis (K:72)
10/27/2002 4:38:54 PM
Thank you for the comment!! I definitely think the same. Eyes need more focus. Thank you for the advice!!! I really need to work on DOF. I wanted the background blurred... but I also didn't want it to be so shallow her face wasn't in focus. Thank you!
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| Photo By: Jerred Zegelis
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Critique By:
Sue O'S (K:12878)
10/27/2002 4:36:48 PM
Welcome to USEFILM, Jerred.
What a sweet old dog! Neat expression! I wish I still had a dog. This makes me miss my dog Shadow.
One thing I noticed that is mentioned a lot by the portrait photogs on this site is having the depth of field focussed on the eyes of the subject. Your dog has a great nose, but I would rather see that worship pouring through his focused eyes as he gazes at his friend, so either adjust aperture for a larger DOF, or make absolutely certain that the eyes are center-weighted and later crop to offset. My two cents.
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