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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/13/2005 6:14:54 PM
Thanks for your comment Michael. Appreciate it.
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/12/2005 8:08:09 PM
excellent composition and colors. I notice that the bottom is made to look like a painting. Very creative.
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| Photo By: Tomasz Niemiec
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/9/2005 2:21:58 AM
Beautiful image Shady. I like the inner stare she has and the background is great too. Makes me wonder what she's thinking.
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| Photo By: Shady Adly
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/9/2005 2:19:35 AM
Thanks for your comment Shady.
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| Photo By: Ryan Suaverdez
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/7/2005 11:55:22 PM
hehehe, very funny. I'll drink to this photo.
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| Photo By: Tyler Robbins
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/7/2005 11:52:59 PM
Nice exposure. I would imagine that adding the bird's chest and making the photo vertical would give the photo more sense of pride.
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Photo By: Gene Zonis
(K:6949)
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/6/2005 11:40:03 PM
great photo. very artistic and moody. great job!
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| Photo By: Stanisa Martinovic
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/6/2005 10:41:19 PM
Glare effect works well here. nice job.
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| Photo By: Gökhan KARAMAN
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/6/2005 10:39:31 PM
fun shot. you're right about the slave flash, or, you could have bounced the flash off the ceiling.
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| Photo By: Tyler Robbins
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/6/2005 10:36:33 PM
Nice composition and color contrast. A glimpse of her face might add a little to it.
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| Photo By: Carlo Macinai
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/6/2005 5:20:20 PM
Nice texture. You could try closing in more on the side of the boat to show more of what's going on with the deteriorating paint. This will also make the viewer glued while guessing what this is a picture of. Just a thought.
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| Photo By: C.A. Mikulice
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/5/2005 6:05:49 PM
Thanks for your comments Shady. I looked at your photos and I think their great and very interesting. I also noticed that you use a rebel 200, I have a Ti. Your photos, for me, show that it's not really about the camera; it's about the one who takes it.
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| Photo By: Ryan Suaverdez
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/5/2005 5:55:46 PM
Cool photo, simple and clean. I like the unconventional framing, it works well here. I don't know if it is just me, but I think cropping a little bit from the top to center the longest petal, vertically, might make it a bit more interesting. Just a thought.
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| Photo By: Marion Luijten
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/5/2005 5:50:25 PM
Nice symmetry. It looks like a robots face to me. hehe
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| Photo By: Tyler Robbins
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/5/2005 5:41:25 PM
I love it. It is very moody indeed. Excellent color contrast and use of nd grad (I guess it made the sky more interesting).
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| Photo By: Matt Newman
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/5/2005 5:35:26 PM
Nice capture Shady. I like the atmosphere. Makes me want to open the door.
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| Photo By: Shady Adly
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/5/2005 5:32:37 PM
Nicely composed. I like how the blue contrasts with the chairs and the colors outside the window.
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| Photo By: Tyler Robbins
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/5/2005 5:30:55 PM
Looks like an intentional abstract painting. It's amazing how someone can make art without him or her knowing it. Could use a little sharpness though.
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| Photo By: Tyler Robbins
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/5/2005 2:08:36 AM
Pretty cool for a first upload. Very serene photo.
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| Photo By: Shady Adly
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/5/2005 1:49:02 AM
Excellent sense of geometry and balance. Great photo!
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| Photo By: Joao Paulo Silva
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/5/2005 1:41:02 AM
Excellent shot. Very dynamic.
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| Photo By: Kamran
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/5/2005 1:39:57 AM
I hope you'll forgive me for being blunt, but I don't feel intimacy in this photo. The smile is fine, however it is the type of smile you see in regular portraits, not in fashion shots. Her expression doesn't match her hairstyle and the clothing style. I don't see any theme that holds the photo together. I agree that it is lit quite well, though.
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| Photo By: Kamran
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
3/1/2005 9:28:00 PM
lol funny
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| Photo By: Abdul Kadir Audah
(K:-21)
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
2/22/2005 1:21:30 AM
I like the angle and the background, makes the subject stand out. Great photo!
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| Photo By: Dennis Couvillion
(K:165)
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
2/22/2005 1:16:36 AM
Excellent composition, very neat.
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| Photo By: Ken Alexander
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
2/13/2005 6:49:17 PM
I've heard of Arbus before, but I'm not too familiar with her work. I guess I'll check her work out, now that you've introduced her to me. I'm a big Cartier-Bresson fan. Thanks for commenting.
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| Photo By: Ryan Suaverdez
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
2/13/2005 6:23:52 PM
Nice quality photo, and it does evoke a feeling of fear. I have a cropped version of it that makes the framing more symmetrical. I hope you don't mind, just a suggestion.
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| Photo By: Kat B
(K:-66)
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
2/13/2005 6:15:35 PM
Excellent contrast between the sharp lines of the trees and the puffy white clouds, and the green plants on the bottom makes it more interesting and balanced. The only thing I would do to edit this one would be to crop out the line (seems like a power line or a telephone line)on the bottom left of the photo. Other than this, it's fine.
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| Photo By: Shady Adly
(K:7814)
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
2/13/2005 4:05:03 PM
Nice composition.
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| Photo By: Robert DeRepentigny
(K:40)
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Critique By:
Ryan Suaverdez (K:1001)
2/13/2005 4:03:02 PM
A very emotional photo. A bit grainy though.
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