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Critique By:
Keith Loveday (K:348)
11/8/2006 3:27:04 AM
this is cool... the color reminds me of some old 8mm nostalgia reels. nice shot...
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Critique By:
Cesar Pinedo (K:1151)
9/8/2003 4:14:24 PM
Creative work April.great colorful and framing.best regards..
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Critique By:
Helena Gomes (K:389)
9/8/2003 4:11:31 PM
Nice, love the colours... hapiness.. 
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Critique By:
Alina Steiner (K:64)
9/8/2003 3:52:03 PM
I like it a lot!
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Critique By:
Teunis Haveman (K:37426)
9/8/2003 3:51:10 PM
Colorful
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Critique By:
Bryce Hughes (K:2957)
4/4/2003 8:55:14 PM
As does this one
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Critique By:
Bryce Hughes (K:2957)
4/4/2003 8:53:27 PM
This is a great and underated shot, with alot of potential.
A bit more sharpness along with contrast and some nice lighting and you have a REAL good shot here.
I'd do this again and keep going till i get it Right.
B&W might add some mood to it too.
I'm going to check up on you april and you better have done it
Take Care
Bryce
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Critique By:
wendy beard (K:35)
12/24/2002 12:53:58 PM
You captured the moment perfectly here. The slanting background detracts a little from the image though, which is a pity.
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Critique By:
Barbara A. Novak (K:306)
11/29/2002 1:14:06 AM
I like the composition very much. It's difficult to get things right in a larger view but macro is very tough with auto exposure. Nothing seems to be sharp in the photo-probably because of hand holding (setting up a tripod would have lost the opportunity) and it is overexposed 
If your Pentax has full manual, that is where you ( and I ) need to concentrate now. Getting the exposure correct is essential--no matter what else is right, if the exposure is off even a little, the shot is ruined.
I wouldn't worry about the spider's legs! Just being there long enough for a shot is something!
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Critique By:
April Atchley (K:103)
11/28/2002 7:21:43 AM
Yes, it's colored craft-type sand I use it coz it takes to the blacklight so well 
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Critique By:
sean slavin (K:3488)
11/28/2002 7:17:28 AM
these are kinda cool. is the sand different colors to start with? 8)
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Critique By:
Anne E. M. Zang (K:4135)
11/22/2002 9:07:19 AM
I kinda wish I could see this without that usefilm green frame around it. I think just plain white would let the colors you captured (which are really great by the way) stand for themselves. I like how the colors have begun to mix in the sand. The texture of the sand gives an interesting presentation of color mixing.
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Critique By:
Elizabeth van Hulst (K:283)
11/20/2002 7:44:10 PM
I know most people will kringe, but I love the way the colors seem just a hair off, warm, overexposed. But I love the tones. Love it.
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Critique By:
Eric Goldwasser (K:4294)
11/20/2002 7:15:13 PM
Looks like a great view!
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Critique By:
Greg Summers (K:1115)
11/19/2002 7:46:31 AM
very creative - wish it was a little sharper
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Critique By:
meprivacynet@meprivacy.net meprivacynet@meprivacy.net (K:3974)
11/19/2002 6:57:19 AM
It is a spectacular view, but the colors are weak and it hurts the picture.
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Critique By:
nathan combs (K:2242)
11/18/2002 9:56:52 PM
needs more conterst and coler the subject matter is a bit on the borring sied my sujuston is to look for a more intersting part of the river ie where it forkes or meanders maby use it as a leeding line to move the eye a cross the land scape hay man do not give up on this idea and shoot it lioes if you can i think you will get the photo you wont keep at it !!!!!!!!
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| Photo By: April Atchley
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Critique By:
April Atchley (K:103)
9/29/2002 1:08:29 PM
It really looks better in 8x10, my scanner isn't that great.
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Critique By:
000 000 (K:1471)
9/4/2002 9:04:38 AM
I love the colour mixture here.
I wouldn?t have cut the hand, if I were you.
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Critique By:
April Atchley (K:103)
9/2/2002 7:26:20 PM
Nice to meet y'all too. - you too AA
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Critique By:
000 000 (K:1471)
9/2/2002 2:36:01 AM
AG meets AG.
I like this meeting.
Keep it up.
AG uses Pentax MX and AG also uses Pentax MG. :-)
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Critique By:
Deleted User (K:2231)
9/1/2002 5:44:51 AM
Nice to meet you April.
-Dave
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Critique By:
Brendon Cordero (K:3524)
8/31/2002 9:32:10 PM
April, use a 80A filter to correct the color for regular light blubs. keep up the good work.
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Critique By:
April Atchley (K:103)
8/30/2002 9:06:54 PM
A little bit yes, but I wouldn't go straight to "quite overexposed" it's a rather shallow depth of field, hmmm I am working on my focus with that lense but Thomas is just that way - very unfocused looking, I'm working on it 
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Critique By:
John Myers (K:4308)
8/30/2002 8:56:55 PM
i love kitties but this photo is quite overexposed. and the focus is quite unfocused. did you use manual or automatic settings? try out the manual settings and try to get the exposure meter right in the middle. a little cropping of the left side might also help.
cute kitty
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Critique By:
Kenneth Kwan (K:3084)
8/28/2002 2:31:00 PM
The concept is very good. Sparkling water can make great images. The focus seems to be off though. And the eye needs a place to rest on. The silhouette of a boat would have been perfect.
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Critique By:
Kim Culbert (K:37070)
8/23/2002 9:23:24 PM
Great idea! This is creativity at its best.
Looking at your image you've got really nice, deep colour in some parts, but in the main area in the middle the colour is washed out and the image out of focus. I think you could easily get a few different images from this one and I've attached the part that demands my attention. See what you think.
If you try this again maybe try with your aperture as high as it goes (f16, f22) to get more of the image in focus.
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