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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/30/2008 7:32:44 PM
Gracias David. Agradezco el comentario.
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/30/2008 7:30:37 PM
Thanks Gary. The toning hides a flat light day and terrible weather in a dull Skegness!!
With AP it all came as a bit of a shock. A mate and I decided to enter each round and we're having a mini competition between ourselves. So far we have both been top 30 in rounds 2 & 4. Whilst we are trying to enter new photos we are allowing old ones if, for whatever reason, we don't have time to work on new ones.
I was just lucky with an old one!
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| Photo By: Paul Schofield
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/29/2008 10:08:44 PM
Yes. No more to say.
:-)
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| Photo By: Violetta Tarnowska
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/29/2008 10:06:26 PM
Simple. But very nicely done. Square is good. Contrast between wire and sky is great. Superb pattern in the sky!
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| Photo By: RC. Dany
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/29/2008 10:04:11 PM
As ever - very special. If I could achieve anything as 1/2 as good as this, I would be smiling.
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| Photo By: ol an
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/29/2008 10:02:07 PM
Good silhouttes and composition. Great lighting to the left well handled because of the high contrast. Nice one.
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| Photo By: Galal El Missary
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/29/2008 9:49:04 PM
Very relaxing composition. Colours look super. Not sure about the person at the top. He adds some scale to the perspective but (in my opinion) should not be there.
I quite like the lighter circle patch you have added and how it runs into the frame. Nice presentation.
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| Photo By: Maria Michalina
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/29/2008 9:46:04 PM
Great silhouette and crop. The grain is good. Excellent dark tones and crisp whites. The fence is good but because of the resolution of the website the wire between looks too sharp (very slight white halo). I think the full size version of this would look great.
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| Photo By: Nuno Reis Gonçalves
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/15/2008 9:31:27 PM
A very strong composition.
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Photo By: Avi
(K:70138)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/15/2008 9:29:29 PM
Perfect. I like the warm white.
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| Photo By: txules .
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/15/2008 9:27:10 PM
Seedy 70's colour cast. Love it.
Un abrazo.
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| Photo By: txules .
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/15/2008 9:21:46 PM
Not my taste, but brilliantly one. Very powerful.
Un abrazo.
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| Photo By: Gustavo Scheverin
(K:164501)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/15/2008 9:16:14 PM
Super rich colours and an interesting composition.
The grass silhouettes make this a stronger photo.
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| Photo By: giuseppe colucci
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/15/2008 9:06:01 PM
Great attitude shot. I may have been tempted to put a little more space between model and metal fence, and used a slightly wider aperture just to separate them a little. Beautiful model.
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| Photo By: Arvin Alston
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/15/2008 9:02:20 PM
Great low key portrait that has been superbly lit. The tones are fantastic and the detail excellent. Tight composition is good and the eye contact between camera and sitter a real winner.
Well done on a super portrait.
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| Photo By: Hamad AL-Naemi
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
6/15/2008 8:56:11 PM
Good tonal range. Almost a painted effect in the sky.
Great clouds. Nice B&W.
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| Photo By: Soumya Ganguly
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
5/31/2008 9:46:04 AM
I'm late. As usual. Belated birthday wishes.
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| Photo By: Wolf Zorrito
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
5/31/2008 9:39:42 AM
A very fine piece. I would be in two minds about the removing the whispy cloud at the very top.
I love the low horizon, the simplicity of the composition of the poles and all that empty space above. Unusual effect with the cross processing.
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| Photo By: Witold Spiess
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
5/31/2008 9:36:17 AM
A chaotic piece - a chaotic trilogy.
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| Photo By: txules .
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
5/31/2008 9:23:52 AM
Good angle and POV. DOF has been nicely done with the super wide lens.
The empty space, the spotlight effect on your model (your girlfriend?) and the non eye contact make this a better image.
You have uploaded some fine photographs recently. Be well.
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| Photo By: txules .
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
5/31/2008 9:11:50 AM
Or you are up so early !!
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| Photo By: txules .
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
5/18/2008 11:00:48 AM
Bright red on vibrant yello work well. I would be tempted to take 1/2 a step backward to allow a little room around the locks and bolts.
Be happy my friend.
Paul
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| Photo By: Wolf Zorrito
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
5/18/2008 10:56:48 AM
The perspective is disorientating which I like. Love the deep blue sky and moving effect in the clouds. The seagull is the icing on the cake.
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| Photo By: Gerhard BuschEFIAP/AFIAP
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
5/18/2008 9:40:26 AM
Just a hint of the person makes this. B&W tones make for a moody photo. Nicely exposed Avi, under difficult conditions of high contrast.
Be well.
Paul
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| Photo By: Avi
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
5/17/2008 9:18:05 PM
For an image made from just one colour, this is really good. The compressed perspective from the telephoto lens and the simple rolling hills make for a great abstracted landscape photo. Square looks good too.
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| Photo By: Simone Lenzi
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
5/17/2008 9:11:46 PM
Not sure about your title, but the image itself is absolutely fantastic. From the slightly off angle, to the grain and fantastic tones; this to me, is superb.
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| Photo By: Mahmoud Baha Sadri
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
5/17/2008 4:40:25 PM
What a beautiful abstract. Lovely balance of light and dark on a simple composition.
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| Photo By: greg mckenzie
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
5/17/2008 4:38:35 PM
Great with just a hint of colour. Square crop works well. For a 15s exposure there is not a lot of movement in the crop. You must have a very still day.
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| Photo By: carl angus
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
5/17/2008 4:35:18 PM
Very nice compo, with the crisp whites and deep black. You have shown the movement well.
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| Photo By: Dan TDFoto
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
5/17/2008 4:29:09 PM
I like the repeating shapes Avi and the vibrant rich colours. The softness looks really good too.
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