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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/11/2009 11:49:44 PM
I think separating the second and third lamps would be an improvement, but that said I understand that sometimes these things are not possible. I love the composition as a whole, and the black areas between the lamps makes for a very intimate and atmospheric image. As Harry says, it is the photographer and not the equipment, even though the GX100 looks to be a cracking compact. I hope the meal was good.
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Photo By: txules .
(K:62768)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/11/2009 11:32:43 PM
A great seasonal abstract. Good composition and details.
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| Photo By: Arben Mallaki
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/11/2009 11:30:25 PM
I like the idea and this has very nice soft lighting is beautiful. The background is bothering me but not sure how. I agree with your choice of simple pale background with some texture but I think the crinkles may be too large and prominent as my eyeskeep getting drawn to the arrowhead creases top left.
All the best.
Paul
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| Photo By: Gavino Tavera
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/11/2009 11:22:24 PM
Good for a camera phone, but the lack of detail in the frame distracts me and in my opinion overpowers the subject. Making it (the frame) smaller, or getting some detail in there, I think, would improve this.
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| Photo By: Ali dewchi
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/11/2009 11:17:26 PM
Great detail and good conversion to mono.
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| Photo By: soumya
(K:13087)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/4/2009 11:07:00 PM
Thank you Saad. Your time and comment are very much appreciated.
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| Photo By: Paul Schofield
(K:5970)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/4/2009 11:06:10 PM
Gracias mi amigo.
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| Photo By: Paul Schofield
(K:5970)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/4/2009 10:53:15 PM
I keep returning to this but don't know what to say. I never thought of the burka anology but can undestand this. This is one great piece of thought provoking photography. I remain silent.
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| Photo By: txules .
(K:62768)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/4/2009 10:41:18 PM
I love the big skies you get in Northumbria. And you made the most of this one. Congratulations on the POD.
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| Photo By: Danny Brannigan
(K:19523)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/4/2009 7:55:45 PM
Dark and moody atmosphere which is lifted by the highlights. I am surprised by the detail and clarity presented here. Full size it must look awesome.
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| Photo By: txules .
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/4/2009 7:45:59 PM
Beautiful composition and stunning details. Excellent post production. This could have been taken anytime in the last 100 years. Another excellent image Claude.
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| Photo By: Claude Tenot
(K:9960)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/4/2009 7:37:57 PM
Nice crisp white snow which can be difficult sometimes. Good composition. Its unfortunate that the sky is a little washed out.
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| Photo By: Jason Row
(K:134)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/4/2009 7:35:03 PM
This is very good. Colours are great and there is a nice abstract feel to the landscape. From a moving car?
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| Photo By: Michele Beccia
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/4/2009 7:32:42 PM
Detail is good but in my opinion you need a little more space around the wreck.
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| Photo By: Marijo Bacho
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/3/2009 4:05:42 PM
If your about is a question, then from me the answer is a resounding yes. This is absolutely superb and a joy to look at together. Critique wanted. Sorry, I cannot see how it could be improved apart from maybe adding a black (or deep grey) edge to the seperate images (a 2 or 3 pixel stoke? should do) so they are defined and don't bleed into the website matting.
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| Photo By: Ian McIntosh
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/3/2009 10:38:46 AM
Thank you my friend. Your comments are always helpful and I really do appreciate your time. May you have a great 2009. (I have sent you a message by email).
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| Photo By: Paul Schofield
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/3/2009 10:15:31 AM
Thankyou Dear Shirley and may you have a happy and peaceful 2009. I often don't put images in projects because I didn't take the image specifically for a Usefilm project. I did however, specifically point my phone at the ground because I liked the patterns of lines, so I have put it in the lines project without feeling guilty. My very best wishes to you Shirley.
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| Photo By: Paul Schofield
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/2/2009 11:31:06 PM
Nice colours on the black background.
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| Photo By: Ahmed Muhammed
(K:18)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/2/2009 11:29:29 PM
Very special. Damn near perfect. Love the textures in the foreground and the composition. And what a B&W conversion!!
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| Photo By: txules .
(K:62768)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/2/2009 11:21:26 PM
Now this is nice but I'm not 100% sure about the figure though as the head blends into the 'blackground'. I do like the grain and the lines and lighting.
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| Photo By: giovanni guido marchi
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/2/2009 10:30:22 AM
Very good Randee. I thought this was cross processed film!!! Be well in 2009.
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| Photo By: Randee Armstrong
(K:-820)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/1/2009 8:32:16 PM
A stunner!!!
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| Photo By: Adrian Nojek
(K:1349)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/1/2009 8:29:34 PM
If this was given a slight rotation then this would be outstanding. The perspective and the B&W coversion are excellent. It is an intersting image with lots to look at but is not cluttered. I really like this.
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| Photo By: Tim Bowman
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/1/2009 8:07:10 PM
Grazie Salvo. Il tuo commento è apprezzato.
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| Photo By: Paul Schofield
(K:5970)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/1/2009 12:59:59 PM
Superb colour and saturation. JD's suggestion is good. Have a Happy and Peaceful New Year to you and your family. All the best my friend.
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| Photo By: Avi
(K:70138)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
1/1/2009 12:46:08 PM
Interesting subject well composed. Excellent conversion to B&W with lovely deep blacks and bright whites. All the best for 2009.
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| Photo By: Salvo Valenti
(K:17038)
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
12/30/2008 6:48:14 PM
A favourite from the ones I've seen so far. You capture the everyday in a beautiful way.
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| Photo By: Dubravko Grakalic
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
12/30/2008 6:46:36 PM
Very classy.
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| Photo By: Dubravko Grakalic
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
12/30/2008 6:45:47 PM
Wow. What a wonderful p/f. I like this one. The tones are just great. It's good to see classy cameras still being used.
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| Photo By: Dubravko Grakalic
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Critique By:
Paul Schofield (K:5970)
12/30/2008 11:50:43 AM
Thankyou for taking the time to view.
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| Photo By: Paul Schofield
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