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Critique By:
Jesvant.S (K:62)
7/2/2002 9:25:42 PM
forgot to upload the edit without car
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Critique By:
Jesvant.S (K:62)
7/2/2002 9:24:09 PM
Fantastic shot.
I dont know if it would be better without the piece of the car in the frame. Seeing the car sort of adds to the spontaneous nature of the image in a way.
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| Photo By: Vizal
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Critique By:
Jesvant.S (K:62)
7/2/2002 3:48:49 PM
Fantastic - reminds me of japanese art.
The only thing that could add to it would be more definition to the red sections on the sun.
Would you mind explaining the process ?
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| Photo By: William R Eastman III
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Critique By:
Jesvant.S (K:62)
6/27/2002 8:48:08 PM
Ahh, if only that silly looking man hadnt been in the frame. Other than him, the photo is excellent.
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Critique By:
Jesvant.S (K:62)
6/22/2002 11:05:18 PM
I agree that the emphasis of the picture isnt quite on the precarious position of the poles, but I really like the grasses and the atmosphere of the photo in general.
If the photo was composed a bit more tightly, thereby excluding the bushes to either side and increasing the prominence of the poles, I think it would really have impact.
I did a crop of your picture as a rough approximation.
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| Photo By: Amanda Tippins
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Critique By:
Jesvant.S (K:62)
6/21/2002 9:20:59 AM
It doesnt appeal to my sensibilites. I dont see any main point of interest to which the eye is drawn.
I do think its a great picture in that youre looking for interesting images in untypical places.
Hope that helped.
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| Photo By: Sean Fitzgerald
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Critique By:
Jesvant.S (K:62)
6/18/2002 2:36:48 PM
some risky business...
I think I actually liked your earlier shot more, it seems to capture the concentration of the archer more so than this image.
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| Photo By: Chris Moore
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Critique By:
Jesvant.S (K:62)
6/18/2002 1:20:16 PM
I agree with you, after uploading it, I really thought it goes nowhere without at least another cloud to fill all that vacant space...
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| Photo By: Jesvant.S
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Critique By:
Jesvant.S (K:62)
6/12/2002 10:38:58 PM
Obviously an excellent Image, and I think your mission was well accomplished.
I think having some of the grasses above surface level in focus would have been interesting. Whether this was plausible, I dont know - you were there (with the great idea, not me.
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