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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
2/16/2005 4:17:32 AM
Love the colors and the lone tree but think the top should be cropped a bit. Very nice.
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| Photo By: J Dillon
(K:1426)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
2/16/2005 4:11:37 AM
The photo is very busy. Hard to find a place for my eyes to rest. Maybe if you were backed off about 20 yards or so.
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| Photo By: Zsolt Radákovits
(K:10376)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
2/8/2005 4:46:32 AM
Nice image. Lighting is good... however the lettering at the top is intrusive and distracting. I think it would be better if it were cropped out. Just my 2 cents.
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| Photo By: Stephen Bivens
(K:7308)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
2/1/2005 2:54:43 AM
I like this one much better. Composition is better. Lighting in great. This one is a keeper. Still should try for lighthouse to be a little off center maybe. Perhaps that is only possible with a pano? Anyway it's a great shot.
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Photo By: Sandra Berry
(K:8352)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
2/1/2005 2:51:51 AM
Any PS work with this piece? It's cool but the iris seems almost superimposed on the grass behind it.
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| Photo By: Bruce W. Clark
(K:1100)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
2/1/2005 2:49:32 AM
Might be better if the lighthouse was not dead center of the photo. Overall a very good photo.
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| Photo By: Sandra Berry
(K:8352)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
11/20/2004 8:47:23 PM
Great lighting, great composition. Very mysterious.
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| Photo By: Paul's Photos
(K:35235)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
11/20/2004 8:40:50 PM
Cool photo! Took me a minute to see it but I love it. The colors and perspective are great.
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| Photo By: Gilberto Santa Rosa
(K:11147)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
11/20/2004 8:39:21 PM
Would be better if the owner's eyes were not cut off. Nice shot tho.
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| Photo By: Gj Stressedafrican
(K:503)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
11/20/2004 8:35:17 PM
Love the lighting...wish the dogs face were more visible.
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| Photo By: Gabriel Sanhueza
(K:87)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
11/20/2004 8:34:17 PM
I like it very much except for one thing. The top of the windows are cut off on part of it making it appear uneven. Very nice photo otherwise.
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| Photo By: Jeffery Culbertson
(K:84)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
11/5/2004 4:22:32 AM
Very whimsical! Adorable!!
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| Photo By: Mark Biri
(K:117)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
11/5/2004 4:21:30 AM
Very nicely done. The direction of the water flow draws the eye all through the picture. Love the slow shutter speed.
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| Photo By: Martin Baker
(K:1282)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
11/5/2004 3:42:03 AM
Great job. Looks like the perfect pano shot. A double rainbow too, it is very wonderfully done.
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| Photo By: Peter Daniel
(K:33866)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/23/2004 2:28:58 PM
I can understand your dilemma. I looked at it a long time trying to decide how it could have been cropped. It couldn't have been done any better than it is already. Just an unfortunate person got in the way. You have much potential so keep shooting.
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| Photo By: Eric Peterson
(K:4419)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/23/2004 12:51:02 AM
Looks almost like some Greek ruins. The break in the middle is very interesting. Nicely composed and good lighting.
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| Photo By: Eddie Honeyfield
(K:18)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/23/2004 12:45:07 AM
How precious! I love it. The colors are great and the subject is just...adorable!
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| Photo By: A K
(K:8499)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/23/2004 12:20:29 AM
That's just pretty darn cool right there! I love the color/ BW mix on this piece. Awesome!
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| Photo By: Paul Sewell
(K:59)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/23/2004 12:18:10 AM
Great capture! DOF is wonderful, colors are excellent. I love it!
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| Photo By: Fred Lord
(K:4844)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/22/2004 11:24:43 PM
Love it! Just love it!!
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| Photo By: micky waby
(K:9141)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/22/2004 11:23:20 PM
Good job. It draws the eyes right up into the image. I find the white on the left lower edge a bit distracting but not too much to ruin the photo.
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| Photo By: T Murphy
(K:110)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/22/2004 11:15:43 PM
Wonderful colors and detail. Nicely composed. Great shot!
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| Photo By: Valentin Enriquez
(K:444)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/22/2004 11:14:58 PM
Very nicely done except for one tiny thing. The woman in the right foreground. She's not immediately noticeable but then POW! there she is. I do LOVE the star effect on the lights. It's really a beautiful picture. Had you been in that girl's seat it would have been simply divine.
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| Photo By: Eric Peterson
(K:4419)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/22/2004 11:07:27 PM
Very pretty image. It feels gauzy to me. Her eyes are very pretty and almost seem to match the color of the dress. You might want to blur the edges so that the right hand side doesn't show the crop line so much but it really isn't that noticeable.
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| Photo By: Phillip Filtz
(K:1792)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/22/2004 10:52:38 PM
By the little white in the right hand corner do you mean my name or that pesky little bit of white on the rose petals? Just curious. Thank you for your comments. 
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| Photo By: Donna Jordan
(K:477)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/22/2004 2:23:17 AM
I like it! I want to go in. Nice colors and great composition.
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| Photo By: Mark Drago
(K:10902)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/22/2004 2:15:03 AM
Nice photo except for the tree growing out of his head. I have a pic of my daughter with a sunflower growing out of her head. Every time I look at it I flinch. Airbrush out the limb and it would be great!
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| Photo By: Taco heikamp
(K:3030)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/22/2004 2:12:44 AM
Hi Shawn. I read your info and I'd like to offer my pointers about this photo. Since you sell on ebay I know that colors are important so I wouldn't suggest BW like I normally would. If this were purely for art, BW would be great with this. That said, I like your point of view...not straight on but from the side a bit. Be aware of anything distracting your eyes from the intended focus (ie the box on the left and whatever is lying on the ground toward the top on the right.) I think you have the potential for some great shots with that old building and those bikes. Keep up the good work. DJ
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| Photo By: Shawn McCammon
(K:172)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/22/2004 2:06:53 AM
Great composition and lighting! My daughter, an avid art critic, says it's very cool!!
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| Photo By: Andreas Hultman
(K:254)
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Critique By:
Donna Jordan (K:477)
10/22/2004 1:55:54 AM
Very aptly named. Charming capture of the little girl waiting on the moment to arrive or the party to be over. The colors are really perfect.
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| Photo By: Vince Cianci
(K:2505)
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