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Critique By:
DeAnn Cummings (K:8)
2/2/2003 6:10:45 PM
I like it. Now I know what to expect with the use of my newly aquired fog filter! THANKS 
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Critique By:
Kim Culbert (K:37070)
11/19/2002 8:25:54 AM
The soft effect filter seems a bit much for such a young girl. Her youth should be shining through, not hidden behind softness. Not that I'm saying that there's should be any softness, but what you have seems a bit much, IMHO.
I agree with the comments about reflectors for the right side and the lip gloss.
I like her pose, looking up into the camera from the flower. Would be interested in seeing more!
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Critique By:
Deb Mayes (K:19605)
11/19/2002 6:46:02 AM
It's a beautiful portrait. I agree about the reflector on the right, and I find the reflection on her lip gloss a little bit distracting.
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Critique By:
Greg Summers (K:1115)
11/19/2002 4:59:34 AM
The softness adds intimacy - I think a reflector on the right side might have provided some needed light to illuminate her face and put some light in her eyes - it is the eyes that make a portrait
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| Photo By: James S. McCall
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Critique By:
Martin Fisher (K:5393)
5/18/2002 10:11:33 PM
Good for you for improvising with a Tablecloth. The lighting looks a little harsh to me. Try bouncing it using an umbrella. If you don't have one, you need one, but you could also "shoot through" a white sheet. If you need more help with that, just e-mail me!
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| Photo By: James S. McCall
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Critique By:
James S. McCall (K:12)
5/13/2002 5:47:09 PM
Thanks Nigel but i already knew that it was a koala regularly called a koala bear i used the "bear" word to describe the photo and thought that it would make for a shorter description on the photo.
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Critique By:
Nigel Smith (K:3834)
5/12/2002 7:23:19 PM
just to correct your (and anyone else who reads this) 'bear' knowledge.. this ain't no bear! It's a Koala, regularly called a "Koala Bear" although it is no way a relative of a bear.
He/She does look rather proud, relaxing in their arm chair!
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