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Critique By:
Bill Krul (K:5597)
4/2/2002 3:58:57 PM
NIce, simple composition but the daylight to the right of the shoes is distracting.
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| Photo By: Carl Beihl
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Critique By:
Daniel L Quigley-Skillin (K:1383)
3/20/2002 3:19:46 PM
I think the blur in this shot works well, there's just enough detail to tell the intent - that's a rather nice touch. The red box and trash cans (?) disturb me a little, but they're not taking too much away from the shot.
Nice job.
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| Photo By: Carl Beihl
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Critique By:
Cary Shaffer (K:393)
3/19/2002 1:14:00 PM
wow, i missed the color the first time through. excellent idea. i think the lady in blue is just enough to upset the balance and make the photo alot more interesting. alone, it is a great shot, but the color adds so much more. i don't know about the guy in red, since it is so small here. i bet an 11x14 is awesome. good eye and good job.
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| Photo By: Carl Beihl
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Critique By:
John Doe (K:170)
3/18/2002 5:26:08 PM
Great composition and I love the color. I bet this looks great at 11x17.
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| Photo By: Carl Beihl
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Critique By:
Daniel L Quigley-Skillin (K:1383)
3/18/2002 10:39:55 AM
Carl-
The two spotches of color definately made me look deeper into the image. The second one was not quite so evident, due to the size of the image. I bet at 11X17 there is a world of difference as you say.
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| Photo By: Carl Beihl
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Critique By:
Carl Beihl (K:357)
3/18/2002 10:28:25 AM
Well, actually, there are two bits of color. The woman in the foreground being pulled through the rain around the corner toward a man in a red jacket about halfway down the block. The intent was to establish a hook on which the viewer could hang some questions, or threads for dialogue. I think the photo works better at 11X17 than at 3X4. Thanks for your feedback.
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| Photo By: Carl Beihl
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Critique By:
E A (K:727)
3/18/2002 10:11:31 AM
I personally find the colour spot very distracting; it makes it hard for me too look at what appears to be otherwise a pretty decent shot. What's the motive for colourising that one spot?
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| Photo By: Carl Beihl
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