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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/18/2006 5:03:00 PM
yep. That's what I mean. Especially the first, the second fits better with your previous upload. Thanks.
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| Photo By: mihai dobrin
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/18/2006 4:48:28 PM
The yellow cast by the sun disrupts the tranquil feel of the photo in the blue tones IMO
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| Photo By: Guido de Jong
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/18/2006 4:46:40 PM
Lifeless abstract, but a good detail. Would fit better in a series than as stand alone, IMO
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| Photo By: mihai dobrin
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/18/2006 4:43:59 PM
Rather forced image; flawed in it's composition on the left, and a too obvious use of PS filters - all rather subjective. You succeeded in breaking with reality, though.
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| Photo By: Don Loseke
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/18/2006 4:41:00 PM
Excellent perspective, and a good placement of the man within the composition. I'd crop off the top of the image to simplify the view - It would make the image stronger.
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| Photo By: Andrea Musi
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/18/2006 4:40:01 PM
Good triptych; Creative post-processing and a good narrative in the three images. Very well done!
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| Photo By: Edward Tan
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/18/2006 4:38:58 PM
The scary bit and tiredness is nicely portrayed, but other than that, I'd disregard this as a missed opportunity - if it were mine.
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| Photo By: Miladin Mareš
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 10:36:52 PM
The perceived tilt is a bit distracting, and it has a snapshot quality about it. I think you can do much better than this - referring to your portfolio.
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| Photo By: david george
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 10:33:21 PM
Concise the view to what's most important; I think you tried to show too much. Use another angle / Point of view, using a diagonal composition, and probably a lower point of view too. Use a wide aperture to create a bit more depth - it's all a matter of taste, though.
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| Photo By: Le Loucos
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 10:27:21 PM
Can't get better than this in B&W florals. Very proficient photo.
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| Photo By: Gianluca Govoni
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 10:25:51 PM
Still a bit heavy on the cyans, and the solar rays look too fabricated, but that's a matter of taste. creative photo.
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| Photo By: khalid almasoud
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 10:24:47 PM
Very moody, expressive and strong - Professional photo.
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| Photo By: Tiago Estima
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 10:19:26 PM
Simple, centered with a slight tilt. Interesting scene, with more potential in it than you show us here.
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| Photo By: Le Loucos
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 10:18:28 PM
Crop off the kids and leave the stairs and the shadows, and you'd have a winner. The photo has too much information in it, IMO
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| Photo By: ol an
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 10:17:15 PM
Could use a bit more detail and balance in the tonal range, but it's essentially a good shot and composition.
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| Photo By: Nebojsa Vrcelj
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 10:10:12 PM
Cool idea, the colors are a bit mucky, though. Did you consider a high key approach?
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| Photo By: Omnia Mamdouh
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 10:05:30 PM
Good photo. The out of focus tree branch in the foreground is rather distracting, though. Applying a crop on the bottom and left would fix that.
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| Photo By: Weston Dru
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 10:03:20 PM
Good atmosphere and interior shot. The camera works in your disadvantage, as it affects the image quality. You're too good for a powershot.
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| Photo By: Marian Veteanu
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 9:59:19 PM
Nice shot
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| Photo By: Branimir Fagarazzi
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 9:59:04 PM
Nice shot
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| Photo By: Branimir Fagarazzi
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 9:58:58 PM
Nice shot
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| Photo By: Branimir Fagarazzi
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 9:57:52 PM
Good abstract; Using a more diagonal composition would make it even better, IMO
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| Photo By: Mattia L.
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 9:57:00 PM
Moody image, a schoolbook example of B&W landscape photography.
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| Photo By: Tamara Verbova
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 9:55:00 PM
I think the man would already stand out as primary subject without the use of selective color.
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| Photo By: Ali Süreyya Torun
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 9:52:13 PM
The green tone doesn't really fit with the subject, makes it look unnatural IMO
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| Photo By: laszlo nap
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/16/2006 9:51:39 PM
Powerful image, and a professional exposure.
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| Photo By: Salvatore Rossignolo
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/15/2006 7:10:43 PM
Work on the tone in the sky a bit, it looks too fabricated / cyan to me. Secondly, place the primary subject out of the center of the image. Thirdly, try to create a stronger separation between primary subject and secondary subjects (ie: background in this case)
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| Photo By: Elena Tunik
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/14/2006 11:25:58 AM
Good curves, but a slight tilt - Needs a bit more post processing to make this more appealing
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| Photo By: Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/14/2006 11:24:24 AM
If you would remove the upward perspective, and straighten the vertical lines, this would also be a good photo.
JC
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Photo By: Marian Man
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Critique By:
JC Flowed (K:1068)
5/14/2006 11:22:54 AM
Now that's more like it, Marian!!!!! Bold, Simple, Powerful, and good balance in composition and tonal range.
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| Photo By: Marian Man
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