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a. M.
{K:9020} 10/12/2005
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thank you john. i appreciate your comments :)
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John K. Choy
{K:591} 10/12/2005
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You have a story of this shot.
Good chance and capture !!
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a. M.
{K:9020} 9/28/2005
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hey bruce thanks for your constructive criticism. feels good to get replies more than two or three words. i appreciate it. come back anytime
Anthony
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Bruce Harper
{K:5305} 9/28/2005
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I like the image and normally agree that an off centre focus is best - rule of thirds and all that, but in this case I think centreing the 'thinker' as you have done is the best.
It might be worth while moving her to the right but I think it needs the corner behind her and the empty space to the left along with the sepia tonings to show the environment she is stressing in. But if you place her to the right of the frame her head would be angled out rather than into the image, but it might work, give it a go!
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a. M.
{K:9020} 9/25/2005
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thanks endre for your comments. you and lars seem to agree.. :)
- Anthony
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a. M.
{K:9020} 9/25/2005
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hey lars..thank you so much for your kind words. and your welcome for the comments on your photos. you have a great collection..
and i see what you are saying about the center thing. i will try it out and see how it works. thats what i like about this site. constructive criticism..thanks lars :)
- Anthony
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Endre Novak
{K:12666} 9/25/2005
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Good capture, the girl is too much in the centre form me, some crop from either side.....
Cheers,
Endre
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Lars Tjernagel
{K:1188} 9/25/2005
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Anthony,
Great photo!! I wanted to stop by and say thanks also for the reviews you gave me on my photos :)
I particularly like this photo. Something about shooting subjects when they are thinking about something...even if you are not sure what they are thinking about; lends to an interesting subject!
One humble suggestion :) You may want to experiment and try and put the subject on either the left side or right side of the photo frame. Usually an off center subject makes the composition more naturally appealing to the eye :)
Very nice work and I will add you to my associates list :)
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