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ahmet özkan
{K:7216} 3/15/2005
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very original image..congrats..
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Marcus Armani
{K:36599} 3/7/2005
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wonderful Landscape, nice lighting and tones in the smoke.. well done...
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Pawel Kwasnicki
{K:9651} 3/1/2005
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Dear Paula, thank you very much for your thoughts; now you convinced me- I had a different idea about this picture and now I know I should re-compose it. My initial intention was this white smoke or steam against the strong morning sun. Looks like I just wanted to show too much of the scenery, so I got a strong contrasts between the foreground and the sun in background. I?ll try to post it again- reframed. Best regards, Pawel
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Paula Grenside
{K:2811} 3/1/2005
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Hi Pawel, good idea and good composition and light. What I don't find convincing is the burned out sun on top and the perpendicular white line, sort of suspended pole. I'd clone it out. The lower part of the picture is really good both for light and the illuminated industrial horizon.
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Özgür ipek
{K:662} 3/1/2005
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nice idea, good work
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