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Ian McIntosh
{K:42997} 1/14/2005
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Great reduction of detail for effect here.
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Helena Gustafsson
{K:417} 11/27/2004
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A beautiful scene with lovely soft colors and deep. Well done!
But I would have cropped it a bit of the left.
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Ezequiel Lozada
{K:17176} 11/23/2004
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Well done, Michael.
Very nice !
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{K:2519} 11/22/2004
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It's hard to believe this is real. As Gervais says, it's like a lithographic print.
Agree with others, a slight crop of left hand side improves it, but otherwise I like the composition as is. There's something about the dead centre shoreline that enhances the 'as seen in the mind's eye' feel of it.
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Luís Lobo Henriques
{K:9002} 11/11/2004
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You're right: Great view! Amazing blues.
Regards.
Luís
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Ian McAllister
{K:124} 11/9/2004
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Lovely soft colours and a beautiful scene. Reminiscent of many west coast landscape water colours. Well seen.
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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185110} 11/8/2004
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Hi Michael, thanks for the reply; and the feedback is something that makes UF so valuable; I noticed the same things, or at least like to think my work also improves due to the feedback I receive....;)
Cheers,
Hugo
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Michael Kanemoto
{K:22115} 11/8/2004
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Hugo:
Agree on both counts, like the first option better. I like this relationship: I post them, you improve them. What could be better?
Actually, I shoot nowadays a bit better because of feedback, this is an older photo where I put the water right across the center...
Thanks for the help.
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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185110} 11/6/2004
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Per attached, the Second version. It shows more of the sky, but as I think the water is the more predominant element in this shot, I'd opt for the first, but I think the composition in the second is stronger... Wonder what your views on this are; You obviously made a deliberate choice...;o)
Cheers,
Hugo
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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185110} 11/6/2004
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Hi Michael, Apart from the fantastic pastel tones, and the impressive scenery, I do feel a bit ambiguous about this one. First, the small strip of the island on the left, which I find a bit distracting, and secondly (and more important to me, is the division between the three elements; waters, shore and sky.
Not making the choice makes sence too, though. If you'd cropped the image in a panoramic format, you'd loose some of the deeper tones of either the water or the sky...
Per attached, the two versions. I think the water is the more predominant element in this shot, so I'd opt for the first, but I think the composition in the second is stronger...
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* James *
{K:20200} 11/6/2004
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a very nice shot. simple but beautiful colours. only criticism is at centre left, whatever it is, i would have cropped it off a bit there.
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Mark Sherman
{K:15669} 11/6/2004
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Those new pools they have, the negative edge, where it looks like it's overflowing, this is that on a really grand scale. In fact the water doesn't look quite like water, So very peaceful
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Michele Berti
{K:14921} 11/6/2004
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beautiful Michael! I like this a lot especially those pastel colors here works really well. i would only crop a bit the left side (where there is a small branch on the top left).
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Maurice Telfair
{K:1036} 11/6/2004
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Michael, this is a wonderful shot, with a lithographic quality to it. I am new to Usefilm, travel a lot and grab landscape shots when I can. Find it very instructive to look at your compositions.
Gervais
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Frank Beer
{K:10112} 11/6/2004
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very good graphical composition with impressive colours!
regards,
frank
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Mark Susa
{K:2301} 11/6/2004
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A beautiful landscape photo with an abstract look. Very nice composition and colors. A scene with a multitude of photographic possibilities, this one is excellent.
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Jeff Cartwright
{K:52046} 11/5/2004
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Very Beautiful...Scenic Visita...Michael!!!
Excellent Tonal Colours!!!
Regards:
Jeff.
Thank you for Including Me...For your Family and Friends Update Email.....Jeff!!!
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