I've come back to this three times. I love your choice of view with looking at subject. Is it the hand or the child??? With that, your model gives the appearance of intense sleep, point of subject is what brought me back. You've chosen a child with a face of peace and rest, addition to being quite restful and you've presented this image well.
Technically, this is splendid also. I don't care if you didn't do work in PS to smooth out shaddows, or if that is just how it is, you've portrayed her very well. Thanks for sharing this.
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