I really appriciate your working on the photos. It's what I enjoy a lot as well. As far as the light concentration I agree, but I like the color contrast between the skin color and the coat's. And I think the skin grains are too sharp for a BW image. Besides, the photo's current lighting seemed really interesting to those who knew the subject, no one had seen him through that perspective! But as a photo, I strongly agree with your recomendations, and I'm glad viewers get the chance to see your altered version of the image. Thanks a lot.
Hi again, nice idea and again a i do have a alternaive to this picture if you dont mind, i did 1. changed to b&W because it gives an stronger image 2, minimised the light on his nose because it was so dominated 3, more lighted on his eyes, thats i gues is the most important area best regards
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