oi like the top face, i think the bottom two are much weaker, they way the boys eyes are squinted, maybe keep the bottom and top and replace the middle image with a different angle and the boy looking more towards the lense. I just think you need 3 strong distinct looks, as it is now the two below are to similar and not as appealing as the top. I have no problem w/the exposure or the black background, perfect subject to experiment with, good luck.
Thanks, Lex, Iknow how to turn colors in B&W , but thats the point. I like the color of his face, he is very tired at 1.00am on New Years eve. Meaby I could change the colour of the background. I'll try it. Thanks Ellen
If you want more dramatic protraits you should try black and white once. But first of all i think you should make the pictures with a light background, not black! I see you made this three digital, if you got photoshop and don't know how you can do them black and white, ask me. Else i start explaining now but then you already know how you can do that :P! My brother has some great B&W portraits, if you want an example look at him. His name is Tim Bronkhorst, look him up!! Greets, Lex
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