Marc I agree with the too busy and distraction of colour comments. I also think it could be cropped a little more on the right to make the bored man more the focus of attention. Ken, please excuse the liberty, but I made the abovementioned changes to the image. I'd be interested to see what you think of them. b.rgds Asha
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Marc Gougenheim{K:5398} 11/30/2002
Humor ? Yes it is humorous, but it is also quite blur, and a bit of a busy composition that would imo work in B&W better, because there are just too many colors of all kinds here, taking attention unnecessarily... 50% floor in an image is rarely a good thing by the way... I believe this one could have been better. It needed a very creative approach (angle) and it was a very difficult shot if you had only a few seconds to adjust everything... Typical difficulties of a Decisive moment shot...
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