Thirsty Child

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By: Isaac Shaw
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Photographer	Isaac Shaw {Karma:2563}
Project	#38 Photo Help	Camera Model	Nikon N6006
Categories	People	Film Format
Portfolio		Lens	70-210
Uploaded	11/26/2003	Film / Memory Type	Kodak Max 800
		ISO / Film Speed	0
Views	410	Shutter	60
Favorites	0	Aperture	F16
Critiques	5	Rating	Pending / 1 Ratings
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About	Captured this image of a little girl taking a drink. Looking for comments, suggestions, etc. on what went wrong/how could I have made this better.

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Isaac Shaw {K:2563} 11/29/2003

Thanks much all. Advice is really appreciated.

Isaac

Hermen Pen {K:9168} 11/28/2003

Nice capture! I agree with R.D. Thompson.
Another suggestion: maybe it would be interesting to come a little closer and take a lower viewpoint? Might be difficult to capture the girl's face in this way, though...

David Cohen {K:1759} 11/27/2003

Fill Flash would help your exposure problem

Isaac Shaw {K:2563} 11/26/2003

Roger,

Thanks much. I see your points and will work on them, it's really appreciated.

Isaac

R. D. Thompson {K:-5} 11/26/2003

I don't normally do this, but you asked. :)
My personal guggestions...
1. Tilt- Verticals should be vertical. All those leaning lines...in the fence and the columns...draw the eye away from the subject.
2. Framing- The shower head and the adult's hand needed to be included to provide flow (pun intended)
3. Exposure- It needed about +1/2 stop compensation to bring out the faces.

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