The color difference between the face and the neck is bothersome, as well as the shine on her face. The earing in her right ear appears as if it is coming out of her cheek. The flatness on the top of her head looks odd. I think having her raise her hands to provide more lift would make the composition better. I don't like the fact that the right breast is cropped.
Well, Marty, ma man... I appreciate the comment, however; I wanted a tight crop on this puppy. I didn't want the flying elbows all over the place, so I wacked them off.
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