Something tells me you did a lot of post processing on this one. I'd love to see the original, as in its current state the image doesn't appeal to me (apart from the main subject :)).
Composition is good, though it could be sharper. Lighting is overdone, colour ballance is weird (probably as a result of compensating for underexposure?).
Overall, an image which is promising but not quite delivering what it could.
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{K:25317} 6/28/2003