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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 6/6/2005
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you exposed correctly for the highlights in this mixed-light situation. Nicely done.
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shay hensley
{K:20} 4/12/2005
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don't have it but i left you mine your prolly at work while im at school it took me forever to find you. I ment chris and my ONLY BABY BRO, and (4 more sisters) in july. jay just got out of the poky ive been out on my own just about all year things are allright though I GRADUATE MAY 17 chat back this evening.
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ron hensley
{K:63} 4/5/2005
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hey hun, long time no see huh? do you remember my e-mail addy. contact me through there, we got alot of catching up to do............ron
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shay hensley
{K:20} 4/4/2005
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at least you take pride in something if you get on here and read this id like to hear a few excuses.
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Bjorn Beheydt
{K:12096} 6/23/2003
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A Nice picture, and the t-shirt is great !!!
But, I can't but agree with Adam... the t-shirt distracts...
For the other things: I still agree with Adam, the shadow on her arm is misplaced, unless there more of these. Her face looks a little flat, but still ok to me though. However, her eyes are a bit misty (overexposed?), which is a pity, because I think she has wonderfull eyes.
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Adam E. J. Squier
{K:9803} 6/23/2003
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Funny T-shirt. Very much distracts from the rest of the image, if it is to be a portrait.
As far as what you want to hear regarding lighting and such, it looks ok. I'd change the background so that it's more uniform. The shadow on her arm looks out of place -- if there were more shadows around it could look ok. Her make-up looks a little flat -- not much definition around her cheeks. Almost looks lifeless. The effect is added-to by the frontal lighting. The dark shadow under her neck could have been lightened by a little off-camera fill-flash or a reflector.
But again, the fatal error on this one is the T-shirt.
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