First off, I like the concept to this shot. Very original. The salt and pepper, I think, should be reversed. Put the salt in the shadow and the pepper in the light. I think the salt gets a little lost in the brightness. Overall, I would have to say I like the entire shot. I don't think I have seen anything like this, anywhere. Please take my comments with a grain of salt (forgive the pun, please). They are just my thoughts and some would see it differently. I hope I have helped a little. David