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Matej Maceas
{K:24381} 6/2/2003
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Mark, just a quick note. I've looked at the saturated version and I think that indeed it does make the scene stronger. The original post is a bit faded out (that's why I mentioned lighting in the previous comment); the enhanced colours liven up the photo.
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Mark McGloughlin
{K:437} 6/1/2003
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Massimo: I have a version with PS super saturated colours. It does look good and in fact, when I looked at your portfolio, it is quite similar!!
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![](http://thumbs.imageopolis.com/CritiqueImages/0/0/2-TN.jpg)
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Massimo Di Maggio
{K:-53658} 6/1/2003
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Good eye Mark, the right subject for illustrate lines, in my opinion maybe better if more contrasted and saturated (if you want look at my similar image). Regards Massimo
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Mark McGloughlin
{K:437} 6/1/2003
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Matej: I agree with your comment. The chaotic growth is in fact another line, running horizontally in the frame. I have many shots from this scene - I will review and look for something better. Thanks.
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Matej Maceas
{K:24381} 6/1/2003
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The chaotic growth in the foreground spoils the abstractish line effect, whilst not really providing a focal point that would contrast with the lines and textures. Perhaps you could crop it off? Also I don't see anything that would be quite in focus. Have you tried photographing this scene at different times of day, with different lighting conditions?
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Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
{K:96391} 6/1/2003
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beautiful details.
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J. Smith
{K:638} 6/1/2003
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Nice lines
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