Hi, Nick. Nice mood you got here, although there are IMO two issues that could be fixed in order to get a better impact. 1 - The bench is in focus, the ladies aren't.
2 - The framing is too tight, taking out some space around the ladies, needed to impell to the infinite their attention and thoughts. I think some more space at least to the right could work
Very nice! I like the muted tones and then the splash of color from the one lady's jacket and the other's (I'm guessing) skirt. Really nice composition.
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