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Noemi Jurado
{K:8849} 10/31/2007
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Nice image, but if I'd have to choose I'd stay with the earlier one :) Good work though, it's great to explore otehr alternatives.
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reza goudarzi
{K:7097} 10/26/2007
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good capture dear friend and thx for sharing
regards
reza.
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Dave Arnold
{K:55680} 10/24/2007
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well, Bernar, nothing more that I can say. I like the colors and the minimalist approach... yes, the subject is interesting from that regard. As you said, you would like to have a wide angle lens, I think any improvement on this would be to use a wide angle and somewhat distort the bollard.
Best to you,
Dave
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Bernardo González
{K:4655} 10/24/2007
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I agree with you in the first regard. The other shot involve more technique, and is more "spectacular". But I can`t resist to the beauty of this bollard simplicity. I want to center the attention in the marks of the pass of time. The rust and the oxide in the floor. Definitely this is a minimalist image as you said.
But Dave, I need this critique constructive, please carry on it.
Best wishes
Bernar
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Dave Arnold
{K:55680} 10/24/2007
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I don't know, Bernardo. I like this in two regards, the coloring and the textures. But on the other hand, it is a let down from the first one you posted where you had such a dramatic scene with the structure in the back ground and the low angle.
I guess from a minimalist standpoint, it fits and makes a fine example because of the colors and textures. So I will try and take that objective into consideration and congratulate you on making that work.
Dave
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Bernardo González
{K:4655} 10/23/2007
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Thanks John.
Greetings
Bernar
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John Hatz
{K:156973} 10/23/2007
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Excellent classic port composition Bernardo, I love that element and its rust, the colors are great and so the placement into the frame, it's a nice framework.
Best regards!!!
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Bernardo González
{K:4655} 10/23/2007
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Thank you.
Greetings
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RC. Dany
{K:64104} 10/23/2007
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Excellent Bernardo.
anne...
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