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Elle Elle
{K:10958} 10/7/2007
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I like this composition, the bird and its shadow, and the way the man is passing by, best, mahassa
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Paolo Corradini
{K:59552} 10/3/2007
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bello il piccione in contrapposizione con l'uomo...bella street
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Pablo Dylan
{K:63918} 10/3/2007
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Forse un po sacrificato il taglio superiore,ci fosse stato il treno in movimento sarebbe stata una chicca aggiunta.
Pablo
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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 10/2/2007
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It is technically relatively OK, Claudia, but what is missing here? While the other allowed space, depth, distance around the people, here the running man is almost "compactificated" between the foreground and the train.
Either go this path to the end, and cut away the whole foreground including that pidgeon and the part of the platform that is under strong light. This way we get a flat image, where the man looks like a two-dimensional caricature. Or, make the patterns of the pavement better visible by underexposing a bit. (They are almost invisible now.) This way (maybe) some kind of leading lines would help to establish the depth.
All the best,
Nick
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Branimir Fagarazzi
{K:38367} 10/2/2007
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Nice shot fago
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John Hatz
{K:156973} 10/2/2007
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it's a very good portrait into a very nice place, the walk with the train as background and ....even the dove looks well as goes at different direction, excellent composition.
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Paul Harris
{K:3208} 10/2/2007
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Really good image
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Simone Tagliaferri
{K:28180} 10/2/2007
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Bella. Una composizione rigorosa di grande effetto.
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G G
{K:61359} 10/2/2007
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Alone with the bird.. Nicely seen and done Claudia
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