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Aniko Heart
{K:26503} 9/1/2007
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Another good one Paul!
May I express my opinion re what I find to be distractions?
The white at her shoulder distracts me. A quick clone job would have taken care of that.
Also, with those gorgeous eyes, I would like to have seen them highlighted a little more.
Also, I might have cropped it a little tighter...
Taylor's hand is somewhat more a "feature" than her face, owing to the light on it "outdoing" the (to me) focal point.. her lovely expressive face. I would have cropped out to show just the top of the hand, or even left the hand out, since you have cropped the top of her head... that would work.
These are my personal opinions only.
I still feel this is a strong and lovely portrait.
Please don't hate me for having given my opions.
Hugs~
Ani :)
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 9/1/2007
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You're so right, Robbie. Thanks for catching that. I can't get very far beyond those eyes. ;)
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Robert Chin
{K:22282} 9/1/2007
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Another lovely image Paul,well exposed and very nice pose.
I think if you had toned down the whites at her shoulder it would improve the image.
Take care
Robbie
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Tom Gessner
{K:2030} 8/30/2007
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Paul - like always - a nice model and a superb technique to work with theses girls to get out the best of them. 7/7
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Marcelo Berraz
{K:12906} 8/30/2007
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Genial este retrato Paul; bravo amigo!!M.
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Shirley D. Cross-Taylor
{K:174136} 8/30/2007
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A very lovely portrait, Paul!:)
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Howie Mudge
{K:27933} 8/28/2007
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Lovely looking model and I like the soft focus feel to this one, gives it a dreamy mood. very nice.
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Lucas L
{K:12145} 8/28/2007
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...a beautiful moment I would dare to say!
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