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Aniko Heart
{K:26503} 10/19/2006
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Hi Paul!
I really like the mood of this well composed image. The light is good, the setting interesting. The look on the face of Melinda makes me wonder what she is thinking.
Great shot!
Warmest and Bestest to you,
Ani :)
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 10/16/2006
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Yeah, given her facial paralysis here, it's up for debate whether she or the sign is actually 'the subject' eh?
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Gayle's Eclectic Photos
{K:91109} 10/16/2006
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i agree with Gary...also,her expression,or lack of isn't working for me...like the textures of sign/fence...
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Billy Bloggs
{K:51043} 10/14/2006
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I do like the contrast of ugly and beautiful, Paul. But I find the strong verticals behind her head distracting. I'd suggest moving the model slightly to the right, leaving out the left side entirely better emphasising her life and the sign's decay.
Regards, Gary
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Ray Hudson
{K:970} 10/14/2006
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I like what you are trying here Paul, different textures against skin,etc. I do think this background is a bit cluttered for this shot - maybe move a bit so the fence post is somewhere else? But I like that weathered sign and the model.
Ray
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Henrik Hanselmann
{K:658} 10/14/2006
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Very nice Paul! Interesting composition. I like the colors, and the matching red in the sign and her lipstick. I think I've have liked the sign to be less sharp, as it steal attention away from the woman.
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